Mark Arbour
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That's quite possible, and you work just as diligently to clear those chapters out and send them back to me. I look at it this way. If I can produce a chapter each week for the stories I'm working on, I'm doing good. Sometimes I do better than that.
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I liked how JP is still dependent on his parents.
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Then you must read on!
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Then you must read on!
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No story for Isidore, but she's a great support character. You'll see a different side of her in "Be Rad", and one that isn't so admirable.
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Not as solid? Read on.
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I'm so glad you liked it! Stefan gets his first story with "The Land Whore." He's a fun narrator. JP is always looking for love. Sometimes he finds it. Sometimes it hurts.
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Well, Jason is a very disturbed young man, and Jeff is not much better. It's tough to build relationships on damaged psyches.
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I thought creating "Ace" from Andre Charles was pretty good!
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It was a feel-good chapter, one for resolutions.
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Yeah, I think that assignment to the Indies provided chances for advancement and money, but also a good chance of death, so that wouldn't be the best station for a guy like Granger. I can see an officer like Calvert or Travers being thrilled to go there.
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The status-quo is a powerful thing to overcome.
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There's a time and a place for everything. We didn't need to know about Robbie's siblings before this. I thought the Poor Man's Son was so focused on Robbie's cousins that his niece or nephew may have clouded things up a bit.
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It's so cool that youre posting reviews! It's making me reread this again. It's like reminiscing. Promise you won't hate me after 1968.
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Who? Oh yeah, them. Well, they were just a little too boring to make it into that chapter. ;-)
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Tony's not good enough for Will? You're like that parent who sits there, sullenly disapproving all the kid's boyfriends. ;-) I'm not sure if the airlines were charging for bags then or not, but I couldn't resist tossing it in. I get a couple of anachronistic passes on each story, no?
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I'm glad you see it that way. Some older guys forgot their adolescence, and think kids like Will should be beaten until they bow deferentially to their elders.
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I think Robbie's attitude, that he can only help those members of his family who ask him for help, is probably realistic. Once they ask him, he jumps in with both feet.
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Sorry to keep you up late. Time will tell if you're right about Jeff. :-)
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Glad you liked it!
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Thanks. Just the start of a really shitty war.
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You're spot on with manwhore
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I think you're correct, in that Robbie's not really able to do that, but he does seem a little tougher about that than Brad.
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Nope. Good guess though.
