Mark Arbour
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Yeah. He really is lovable.
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It's like a good massage. ;-) Re: The End: No.
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He can be a little stubborn (not unlike his partner), and like I said a few reviews ago, he is very influenced by his emotions. Paternity is a way off from the end. There's some more stuff I have to do still.
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There's just a few more strings to tie up, then I'll unravel some more. ;-)
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Thank you. I think that healing can be done quickly when there's a lot of love, and there's good communication.
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I think Robbie can be seriously blinded by his emotions. They are his strength and his weakness.
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I'm sorry about that. The only thing that changed was the font for Will's portion. I did that for two reasons. I switched it to "Georgia" so it would be consistent, and because that font looks way better on my iPhone. Thanks Tim. This has been a really busy time. I'd been posting a chapter every 4 days, and then I'd been every other day (pretty much) for a bit while we got through Will's crisis.
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October 20, 2000 Santa Cruz, CA Wade The rest of us disembarked from the helicopter at a more leisurely pace and walked over to the house. We went out onto the deck and watched as Brad paddled out to where Will was. They didn’t really seem to say much, but then we saw the reason, as a huge wave appeared. We watched in awe as father and son mastered the wave, taming it with their boards, until they were both finally thrashed in the surf. Now they were both ashore, and Will w
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You're quoting bible verses? In my forum? If ever there was a sign of the impending apocalypse!
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I'm hoping it's a fun adventure. George has certainly come a long way so far. I think the reason that the Wilcox clan targets George is because they can. Their power is generally concentrated in the navy. Bertie will be more immune to it.
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They're a bitchy bunch.
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I'm glad you liked it.
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Paternity Music Recs
Mark Arbour replied to methodwriter85's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Mine too. Jeremy doesn't like to reach back to the 60s for music though. He'd rather bitch about being stuck in 2000. ;-) -
Paternity Music Recs
Mark Arbour replied to methodwriter85's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
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April 13, 1797 The carriage deposited him in front of St. James Palace, and Granger alit from the vehicle, trying to look calm and unruffled, an affected air. He was as well turned out as one could be, with his new dress uniform coat on, a new silk shirt, new breeches and stockings, and even new shoes, with perfectly polished gold buckles. Dangling from his waist was his ceremonial sword made of gilt, and he wore the ribbon and star of the order of the Bath, symbols o
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Just like the characters can learn (see previous review), so too can the author learn. I discovered early on that if a character was going to suffer, it had to be for a reason. Gratuitous pain only works in S&M scenes. :-)
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I think all of these characters have learned from their mistakes, more or less. That doesn't mean that their core personalities can't come through and still cause them problems. I'm so glad you liked the chapter. I think writing the happy endings are always a lot of fun, whether it's to a story, or just a chapter.
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You're pretty astute. I figured you'd like the father-son surf scene. I've been chuckling about that, since I wrote it before you said anything, and I thought it was cool that someone suggested it.
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You want me to?
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Based on some of the reviews a few chapters ago, this one is pretty good. :-)
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I'll see if I can't find some drama for you. ;-)
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You just have to think about Robbie, and how he is, to know how this will end. :-)
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I agree with you, and thanks for "the perfect 10". I think they still have a way to go to work it out, but the basic desire is now there on both sides.
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Thanks. You like Jeff, eh? We'll see how that works out. ;-) Granger's on a weekly posting schedule for now. Expect that to continue. There could be a few rocky times in the near future, though.
