Mark Arbour
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An astute observation
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I liked that one too. Wait until you see what he does. ;-)
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October 4, 2000 Palo Alto, CA Wade The meeting ended, but before I got caught up in talking to people, I managed to extract myself and find Matt. “Hey, I’m going to study for my Psych quiz tomorrow with this guy in my class.” “Who?” “The guy that sat with Stef,” I said. He was off by himself now. “He’s over there,” I said, gesturing toward him. Stef and JP had gotten mobbed, and Josh must have been overwhelmed by it, so he’d kind of backed off to the side, and o
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Lots of interesting thoughts. I'll post another chapter and give you something new to think about. Sorry for the delay on this one. I've been out of town and my laptop crapped out.
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I thought that was the perfect name for the ship. ;-)
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One of my better reviews. LOL
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Set up for the next piece? Most definitely.
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Thanks. I agree with you about George being happiest at sea. Especially now, when it sucks to be home.
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March 20, 1797 “Sir, a note has just arrived from your father,” Cheevers said as he was eating breakfast with Llewellyn. Granger opened it and read the words he’d been expecting: Your grandfather sends his regards. “Thank you Cheevers. I will be leaving shortly.” Granger had already put on his best uniform in preparation to see the First Lord. “I’ll alert the coachman, sir,” Cheevers said respectfully. “Do you have everything you need
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Well thank you for that effusive review! I think your view of my mind as awesome is a little wide of the mark (cute pun, no?). I think twisted may be a better term. ;-)
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Your English was quite good. I realize that CAP often pushes limits, and sometimes pulls people out of their zone. That's not always a bad thing. And as this is quite the soap opera, you can never quite be sure if couples will stay together, or stay apart. ;-) De rien.
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That's you...thinking with your dick. :-) I think you'll like the scene with Elizabeth Danfield.
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Well, you've caught up, and now you have wait for me to roll it out. I've been doing some writing lately, though, so hopefully there won't be any major time gaps ahead.
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No kidding. Then again, if you spent all that time caked in salt water, you'd want a bath too!
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Thanks Tim. That cuts both ways, too. For me, it's great to hear how readers perceive things. On a few rare occasions, feedback has been rude, but otherwise, it's been extremely productive. There are times when I'll be working into a situation with a character and I know it's going to cause issues, and the feedback helps me modify how I explain what's going on. In that way, it can shape the stories, but usually I have things pretty well mapped out...at least a few chapters ahead anyway!
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Well, they are similar, but it's hard to say they're the same since we didn't see a 14 year old Brad. 14 year old Will is a piece of work. I'll handle turning 50 just fine, as long as my dick still works. So far, so good. Over the top? Really? And I thought it was spot-on. Seriously, I appreciate your comments. It's nice to be appreciated.
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Will is the new, improved model: calmer and more mature. Not.
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LOL. I've made you all so paranoid, a nice guy rolls into the story and it's impossible to just relax and enjoy him. Muhahahaha. Seriously, I'm not sure how much influence Josh will have on Wade's life, but it seemed like Wade would have more interaction with other students, so Josh is my stab at bringing that out.
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I'll try to brew up some more drama in Chapter 22.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. The significance is that Wade has now figured things out, he's not in the dark anymore, so his only real issue now is how to deal with it. Since he's Wade, of course he has a plan. :-)
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She's pretty diabolical!
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October 3, 2000 Stanford University Palo Alto, CA Wade I sat in my psychology class, getting myself organized while waiting for the professor to get there and start things up. This was one of those classes that I had to take but that I’d put off, so most of the students in here were freshmen. They were a little intimidated by me, and tended to stay in their own little groups. That would change as the quarter wore on, but for right now, I was all by myself, and I was j
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Maybe there's something to this astrology stuff after all. *ducks*
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Wait a minute, I'm not a Pisces, and I'm usually stoned. You made your point.
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OMG! How awesome to see you around! Thanks for that! I'm glad you like this one! Damn, I love a hot guy in 501's. :-)
