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  1. Mark Arbour
    I think the next couple of chapters will do a better job of spelling out Brad's motives, but that really isn't the big issue here. The big issue is that Will is feeling pretty isolated, and as I said in one of the reviews, when a 14 year old guy like Will is feeling embattled, his reaction is going to be to lash out. The stronger he fights, the more upset he is. There's an imbalance in his life, and he's trying to get his father to notice him. Brad, in his defense, is trying to balance a bunch of different things as well. Until they figure out how to find a harmonious convergence, it's not going to go very well.
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    Chapter 23

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 23

    I agree with everything you said, but I think that the equation gets a little murky when molestation is involved.
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    Chapter 23

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 23

    Well, they're all being selfish here, but they're all ignoring the issues beneath the core. The blame for that usually lands on adults.
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    Chapter 23

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 23

    You get that teen mentality, the way when a kid is hurting, feeling lonely and rejected, his primary response is to lash out.
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    Chapter 23

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 23

    You hate him now? It gets worse.
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    Chapter 23

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 23

    Yep. ;-)
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    Chapter 23

    Mark Arbour posted new chapter in Paternity

    October 4, 2000 Westwood, CA Will “Dude, you want to come over and study?” I asked Grafton. “I have to go home tonight,” he said morosely. “My mom is pissed off that I haven’t been around. She has to tell her shrink that we have dinner together at least a couple of times a week.” I laughed at that, since it seemed like he wanted me to. We’d spent most of the week hanging out. On Monday and Wednesday, we’d gone to see JJ practice, and the rest of the time we’d do
  8. Mark Arbour
    Well that was good work. He has a better look for Josh.
  9. Mark Arbour
    I'm glad you are enjoying this series! I'm thinking of a name change for the next story. I'll let you know.
  10. Mark Arbour
    I think this was an incredibly astute observation about Granger's development from a boy into a man.
  11. Mark Arbour
    Don't think anything of the empty review. It was funny. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, but you're right, a sword fight with Caroline and Davina isn't in the cards. I'm not even seeing a "Dynasty-like" battle in the fountains. :-)
  12. Mark Arbour
    I'm glad you liked it. It's not easy to tie up all of George's loose ends, so I tried to settle for most of them.
  13. Mark Arbour
    Thanks! I hope to get the next story out before too long, but I want to relax for a bit and pause.
  14. Mark Arbour
    Wow. Thanks for that! I'm so glad that you do read, and that you give me feedback! Spring Break is coming, so maybe I can find some time to get the next story going then. :-)
  15. Mark Arbour
    I'm so glad you do, mm!
  16. Mark Arbour
    Thanks for the excellent feedback! It's been great throughout this story! I know there are a lot of questions that have been left unanswered, but I'm hoping you see that as my pledge to keep going, rather than a detriment. Granger's life has become very complex, and it's unlikely that we'll have wonderful wrap-ups like we did before.
  17. Mark Arbour
    I think that sums it up nicely.
  18. Mark Arbour
    That's it. Who is this guy?
  19. Mark Arbour
    Being a little lazy Jeremy. ;-)
  20. Mark Arbour
    There will be another book, when I have time to work on it.
  21. Mark Arbour
    Well, since I haven't started writing the next story, it will be a bit, but it will happen.
  22. Mark Arbour
    No early deaths for George planned at this point. I'm glad you liked the story!
  23. Mark Arbour
    I can't see the picture.
  24. Mark Arbour
    Alright, this is unusual, because you've been nailing these guys spot on, but this one doesn't work for me. I'm thinking darker hair, a longer face, and smoother skin.
  25. Mark Arbour
    That's exactly how Wade is, in that he has to know the guy before the rear entrance is an option. I can see him hooking up with lots of guys to blow them, but the big penetration thing isn't happening for him unless he likes the guy, and knows him reasonably well. We don't know Josh well enough to know if he's like that or not.
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