Sorry about the blue writing. I can change it if someone has better suggestions, but I think it would be hot to hear Steven Hawking reading it.
Regarding Gathan and Stef "still" having sex. I see this as an interlude thing, something to help Gathan move on to the next step of his sexual life. "Still" implies that it's been going on for a while. In fact, they started having sex on a Friday (or was it Thursday) and it's just now Tuesday.
I could make Will this amazing, lovable character, or I could make him a teenager. I chose the latter.
July 10, 2000
Chesterfield, MO
Gathan
“That seemed to go well,” Stef said as we took our seats in the plane.
“It seemed to,” Brad agreed.
“Whatever,” I said. “You were rock stars.” They smiled at me to thank me for my compliment, but I could tell they needed more. “Dude, you could tell by the looks on their faces when you started talking they were scared shitless. They thought you were there to tell them you were shutting down the plant and laying them of
Greasy pancake? You have this vision of me with Boris Yeltsin hair?
Still, that was pretty funny, and people like Brenda Hayes are about my worst nightmare.
You thought I'd have Cody and Will and John in a menage a trois as the way Will and John lose their virginity? Dude, you have got to stop getting high that early in the day.
That's true, and I do apologize to my non-US readers for the probably localized "April Fool's Day" reference/chapter, and the fact that with time lags, who knows when you'll actually get to see it.
Dude, it was a joke. Here's what I don't get. Three characters, including my favorite, Stefan, get killed, and you guys are upset because two teenagers seduced a 30 year old guy? Really?