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Johnathan Colourfield

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  1. The walls were covered in the blood of her enemies as she sat slowly purring about what she had done. She had set something upon her own son; her own flesh and blood. What was even worse was that she did it to her husband. The man that saved her; once upon a time. But that fairytale charade could no longer continue in her eyes. It was time to stand up, brush off and carry on. Everything was about to change, she had been drilling for months and she knew now was the time to create the
  2. Thanks for reading
  3. Glad that you enjoyed
  4. thank you so much Louis! I'm honoured to get such a rave review extra cookie and milk for you later
  5. I think the first game was a bit more fun than the second one. I think the variety of the first game was a bit more exciting. The one shot serial killer game seemed a bit slow to me
  6. hehe this is amazing
  7. Just to thrown in what we did for the European meet ups: Basically we met at a landmark (the british museum for London) and had a chat over coffee (hot chocolate for me) Then we had dinner in the afternoon. Then we found a coffee shop and spoke for what seemed like hours. Then i had to go home but I know the others went to a Carnival Key is just be happy to go with the flow Enjoy yourselves!
  8. Happy Birthday!!!
  9. I love the Simpsons I loved the haunted house episode and who shot mr. burns. I always watch it at 6pm every day
  10. We could always do both oooo sounds interesting elez There is also a set of gardens i want to go to that are just outside of Paris that are lit up at night <3 We need to figure out dates at some point My suggest would be the weekend of the 31st of August or the 7th September. I'm on holiday 15th-22nd Sept with family and then i go back to uni So what do people think?
  11. Well done Cassie Hope to join you one day If i ever have time to write and post...
  12. Hell yeah Looks like we will only be able to do an overnighter but its better than last time hehe A proper french picnic. I'm in love already. i'm going to the louvre and no-one is stopping me I love art
  13. no particular order 1) Paris, France 2) Moscow, Russia 3) USA 4) Tibet, China 5) Australia Finland, Wales and Scotland were close but didn't quite make the cut
  14. Wow Lots of people to thank hehe People who have helped me throughout my writing: Cia (Goddess of an editor... don't know where I would be without her) Tiger (God of the above ) Maria (Great Beta Reader) Lugh (Arse kicker) Myr (Arse kicker) Frostina (all of the above ) Sharon (for telling me off, then telling me it was good once it was rewritten ) Nephylim (inspiration ) I'd like to also thank those I edit and beta read for Dee Cia Kiltie69 Roan LemonPie Chris Pieto Dezyree Salvatore (hope thats spelt right )
  15. You are in a room. You don’t know why. You see things and you hear things. What did you do?
  16. You are sat in a room. It is dark. You can smell volcanic ash. You look around you, you can see nothing. You take a deep breath. Exhale. You think to yourself ‘I am in a room. It is dark. Why am I here?’ You hear a voice. It calls to you. You can’t tell where it is coming from but you can hear a voice. ‘Can you smell it?’ It says. You think to yourself, ‘I am in a room, it is dark and I can smell volcanic ash. Why is something so strange happening to me, someone tha
  17. well done KC
  18. well when i briefly spoke to you in London you seemed like you had a strong control of your language. I think its experience with just english speakers that will help you paya Glad you guys managed to make the decision, good luck and i'm thinking of you
  19. if its setting something up thats important to the plot then do it I'm sure your readers won't mind a bit of preaching, especially if it sthe good kind Remember not to head hop though. Focus the sermon from your characters point of view and don't let plot bunnies slip in Hope this helps
  20. the second one sounds kinda similar to Linxe's Spider Webs. Hope this helps i'm probably totally wrong!
  21. Russia to see the Kremlin Same Q
  22. I like them to be taller than me <3 Authors: Why do you write? Readers: Why do you read?
  23. Two plans are better than one. I think you need to talk it over in person It all depends on what parts of your personality you want to develop. Do you want to be louder or quieter?
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