I've never really spoken to you but it is unacceptable for people call you names. It's cyber bullying. If its a site member report it to the moderators and make it a site issue.
If its a personal issue, then just don't talk to them
Hope you are okay
John
My point with this story was trying to make the audience member give the answers; rather than provide them.
The volcanic ash idea was meant to confuse actually I put it there to make people question the smell of fire
Definitely subjective for a reader.
Thanks for your review!
The walls were covered in the blood of her enemies as she sat slowly purring about what she had done. She had set something upon her own son; her own flesh and blood. What was even worse was that she did it to her husband. The man that saved her; once upon a time.
But that fairytale charade could no longer continue in her eyes. It was time to stand up, brush off and carry on.
Everything was about to change, she had been drilling for months and she knew now was the time to create the
Just to thrown in what we did for the European meet ups:
Basically we met at a landmark (the british museum for London) and had a chat over coffee (hot chocolate for me)
Then we had dinner in the afternoon. Then we found a coffee shop and spoke for what seemed like hours.
Then i had to go home but I know the others went to a Carnival
Key is just be happy to go with the flow Enjoy yourselves!
We could always do both oooo sounds interesting elez There is also a set of gardens i want to go to that are just outside of Paris that are lit up at night <3
We need to figure out dates at some point My suggest would be the weekend of the 31st of August or the 7th September.
I'm on holiday 15th-22nd Sept with family and then i go back to uni
So what do people think?
Hell yeah Looks like we will only be able to do an overnighter but its better than last time hehe
A proper french picnic. I'm in love already.
i'm going to the louvre and no-one is stopping me I love art
no particular order
1) Paris, France
2) Moscow, Russia
3) USA
4) Tibet, China
5) Australia
Finland, Wales and Scotland were close but didn't quite make the cut
Wow Lots of people to thank hehe
People who have helped me throughout my writing:
Cia (Goddess of an editor... don't know where I would be without her)
Tiger (God of the above )
Maria (Great Beta Reader)
Lugh (Arse kicker)
Myr (Arse kicker)
Frostina (all of the above )
Sharon (for telling me off, then telling me it was good once it was rewritten )
Nephylim (inspiration )
I'd like to also thank those I edit and beta read for
Dee
Cia
Kiltie69
Roan
LemonPie
Chris Pieto
Dezyree Salvatore (hope thats spelt right )
You are sat in a room. It is dark. You can smell volcanic ash.
You look around you, you can see nothing. You take a deep breath. Exhale.
You think to yourself ‘I am in a room. It is dark. Why am I here?’
You hear a voice. It calls to you. You can’t tell where it is coming from but you can hear a voice.
‘Can you smell it?’ It says.
You think to yourself, ‘I am in a room, it is dark and I can smell volcanic ash. Why is something so strange happening to me, someone tha