Johnathan Colourfield

It's a really excellent story Also, buy a copy of "The Runaway" Also by Nephylim, it is an excellent novel.

Happy Birthday Muffin <33

It's a really sweet story and cute However, the story isnt perfect, by a long shot. Needs a good rewrite for it to dazzle The characters are adorable and one can easily identify with them - their relationship is very volatile and realistic which i find is a strength in the writing. Translation. You say he's a translator but you don't mention the language. You say it enhances the readers views, but for me it just annoyed me. I think you need to say, even if its only once what language he works with. maybe include some examples (Italian Maybe?) The joke make me laugh a lot - little moments of genius ^^ Generally, I enjoyed the story and it was well written, considering it was written when you were 16 *pats you on the back* Well done! I'd reccomend this story to any reader

Happy Birthday Podga!!!

Good to hear CJ. I've not read your work - I need to at some point but i look at it and go oh god thats alot of words - but i've heard alot of good things about it. It's amazing what a bit of reader feedback can do for a story isnt it?

The thin light that came through the room she was sleeping in was shining directly across her face. In normal circumstances a light that bright would wake someone but she was in a sleep that was too deep for her to awaken from for a few hours yet. Her leg twitched as she rolled over in her sleep. The silk night gown rode up her arm revealing her tattoo. She could hear them talking about her, in this dream world. The doctors. They were speaking about her condition. They had given her

It was as if something had hit the planet. The world was mindless; they just followed the order of the biggest authority that there was available. The people moved around like animals with no energy. They couldn’t move on their own. They walked heavily and without an aim. The Secret Army was looking for those that would rebel. Those that hid from the regime led by The Shrouded One. They asked people to stay inside for now, until all major buildings are checked. People were als

Doesn't phase me as i had braces myself at a young age

More of a focused update here. Womans Game 2: Posting begins 23rd September for 7 weeks (Nov 4th - Last week) After November 4 - i shall be posting a BRAND NEW story!! Its title is: 'House No. 654: London's Best Little Whorehouse' Pearce takes pen to paper and decides to tell his story. He didn't know how anyone would take it; but it was time for the world to know what happened to him inside House 654. The plan is for the story to be finished by November 1st and then have it edited so I can start posting it on the 18th November for 10 weeks (January 20th 2013 - Last Week). So lots of new updates for GA in terms of my work and for a longer period In addition to this, I shall be posting a short story towards the end of October with help from a few other authors. I also plan to participate in all of the 2013 anthologies. Also, I shall be posting the results from my creative writing class at uni on GA So all good news and so excited to share what I have with you all! Love Johnathan Colourfield xx

I seldom drink - i dont really like alcohol that much. But i do like white wine and cherry wine is my absolute favourite. Although Mimosas sound very nice...

Welcome back Matt! We missed you

Welcome to GA dear If you get 5 posts you can join the chatroom and theres always someone in there well usually

Hello There Guys I thought it was time i did an update on my writing blog on GA Good news! I have decided to plow ahead and post the second half of the woman's game when i arrive at university so that will be 8 weeks worth of posted stuff for you The story comes in at around 24k In other news, I'm taking a creative writing class this semester so I'll be posting the results from that and submitting some of my work from GA for my portfolio I have 3 stories in process which I will finish eventually Each will roughly amount to 20,000 words Not much more of an update I can give really Just gotta get motivated with writing Someone motivate me xD

Hiii Thanks for the compliment NotNever hehe I'm from the UK as well and i have alot of stuff posted

You can get through this I understand losing a pet is very hard but you can be strong in front of your kid and then cry in private i'm sure This is just a bump in the road

(hug) for yettie

Hope you had a good day!

naked cuz i hate wearing clothes in bed - i get way too hot

I'm interested.

Hug be strong x

Happy Birthday Have a load of candles... I ran out at 21 - so you're 21 forever

Just to update everyone I went away to my brothers this weekend and I feel much better cuz of it Getting out of her hair was the best thing I could have done

what a wonderful little twist on santa claus I loved it

I shall speak to mother nature and see what I can do although, last time i spoke to her she gave me a rain storm...

I'll be there ^^