Johnathan Colourfield

Excellent to have more people interested I think plans will come together towards April time; so people have time to book and stuffz

Glad hear she is recovering; stay strong Q

Oh wow A Merry Birthday to you

I agree with Neph. I would also reccomend editing it yourself before sending it to an editor. My editor Cia, I try only to ask her to do final spelling, punctuation and grammar checks. Although she almost always finds a plot bunny...

I can only utter the same sentiments that have been said before. Bill you are an excellent writer and don't leave writing just because of some fools. In my opinion, if criticism isnt constructive then whats the point in being totally negative? I understand if it is an editor saying it to a writer but otherwise its no go area. I can also repeat what Bill said. We are not professionals; not many authors on the site make money from what they write. They do it for the passion and intensity that writing can bring. If you scathe them, then they lose the passion and they stop writing all together and that is something NO writer should ever have to face. For example, in a book i'm reading at the moment (about publishing books), this lady had an eye condition but she still produced over a million words in one year. Its amazing how some people get through their issues. My only request is think before you post a review Will it offend the author? Or will it help them? Help is always the best option We are a community of writers here to help and be there for each other. Hope i didn't ramble...

Bah. Cia or Neph for Queen of Cliffhangers. High time a female author won it

Hehe its something good to see everyone takes a different perspective i guess

Hehe omg i didnt have a birthday cake Well, i had this mini thing from pizza express on wednesday if that counts? P

I will be putting something together most definately it was my theme after all

glad you enjoyed i liked writing this poem

haha spent the day with my family that was good My fish memory is already bad so i'm screwed when i get to your... delicate age Thanks my day was awesome thanks my day was awesome with my family Thanks Sharon! Thanks Mark Hope you are well thanks comic Thanks anyway!

Freaking love this picture XD you too <3 Thanks! Gaelic is foreign i dont understand. *hires a translator* Thanks Right back at ya Thanks I dont know you but I hope to get to know you!

i got inspired by TS Eliot and i wrote it as if i was that character; but changing it so it fit the gay idea. Although it would have worked from any perspective

hehe you're welcome I have moments of genius haha

Oh my what a beautiful tale; i found myself a bit confused towards the middle but that is to be expected in a short story with so many characters. The pie made me laugh; I should have cringed but i didn't, i found it funny. Well done. Would you like some pie?

:$ awww shucks! Why'd you like it so much?

I love poetry like this. I write like the wind when i get a theme; and a poem to base it on

thanks for the review conner

They were in lockdown. The Shrouded One was that paranoid that she had to implement her highest security measures. The Mental Patient spoke hesitantly but in a confident tone. ‘You in here too?’ ‘I guess you could say that,’ The Clone spoke in a fair tone with a stutter of feigned fear. He smiled with his perfectly white teeth creating a gleam in the dark blocked out chamber. The Mental Patient spoke once more. ‘What did they bring you in for?’ ‘To talk to you.’ ‘W

Ding dong… Ding dong… The chiming of the clock… Alarm bells… He could hear them all in his solidarity. He was so alone and yet so content. He had the great chance to do something. They were telling him something. They were telling him something important. A large deep bell sounded in his mind and then the sounds, they stopped. They stopped playing and he was left with silence. The power had been shown. His memory of what he could do came back. He was taken into the

Happy Birthday Birthday Sharer

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Happy Birthday you sneaky man

Well done Nephy Little steps You have your toe in there so you are getting your name out there I will buy the paper book Sign it for me!

General Nom. Apart from Santa. That would be weird