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Palantir

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  1. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Thank you! Thank you!😀 Yes, new and strange occurrences face the rather extended group of adventures.
  2. Chapter 1. "Uncle will go out of his brain when he sees all our new gemstones. We’d better not tell him we've been carting them round in our packs for nearly a month." "Does he know we can only stop for half an hour?" "He does, but when he sees the giant rubies Lady Narello gave me, he’ll blow a fuse if he can't have a big discussion." "Hmm! Half an hour’s all the time we can spare so what if I give him an acceptance boost? He worked with us for ages the other time and those
  3. Kieran and friends, after an eventful holiday time in Mparntwe and a quick visit to the Realms, head for Melbourne to check out the successfully purchased Realm Tree site.
  4. Palantir

    Origin

    Great start. You made me smile. You made me intrigued. I like the natural flow of your writing and, oh my, there's so much potential for where the story might go.
  5. Remember them? Good grief! I play their music almost weekly.
  6. 1. Heinlein is one of the greats. 2. Reading is highly subjective and personal, and the old saying 'one man's meat is another man's poison' very much applies. Stating as fact, rather than opinion, that a particular novel or piece of writing is poorly written, wonderful, boring etc, can be taken with great exception by readers with different views. 3. Amended number 1. I regard Heinlein as one of the greats. 4. DNF. Good grief! I think this is a powerful tool for anyone who loves reading. There are more wonderful reading experiences available than anyone could ever get through, so why waste time reading stuff that doesn't do anything for you?
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  12. Great little story - you should write more,
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