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Caroline pregnate by another man, even if he is a Royal. Arthur losing it, Cavendish involved and acting weird. Losing his comman, I am starting to think Granger should have stayed out to sea even in a damaged ship...
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Has everyone lost their minds????
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Well, damn, I just never saw this one coming... I have to wonder who the father is going to be??? Is there going to be a Royal addition to the Granger family???
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A sad way to end his trip back to England. He is going to be without a ship. I am sure they will find something else for him but still. Even the prize is not enough to offset the loss of his command, that along with the other issues will make this a sad homecoming for Granger...
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No good deed goes unpunished, George was trying to help Somers and Kerry bridge the gap but got left out in the cold... I am not sure either understands how badly they may have hurt him. Calder is an ass but with with others going ashore, they should be able to offset his negativity about Nelson...
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The writing in this chapter was just first rate. You could really feel the action of the battle and the horror of it as well. I was glad to see that Granger and his crew came through really unhurt. I hope that Lt Roberts gets his chance and that Gatling can stay with him.
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And so the battle begins... I do think the artwork and drawings are a great help. It gives a better feel of the ships and their places in the battle. I can just feel the tenor of the action in the written words. This is what great writing is all about...
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Granger caused a little chaos and caused the fleet to split. The fact they were in two lines is one of the chief reasons that the English victory was grounded in. I hope that all those involved come through the coming fight...
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Glad to see Lt. Roberts and Captain Somers back on board. I am glad that Nelson decided to make the stop in Gibraltor. I find myself not wanting to get to the battle that is coming. I don't know why but I have a sense of dread for some reason...
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Uh, well that was interesting to say the least. I did not see that issue coming up with our Welsh midshipman. I was glad to see how Granger handled it and took time afterward to talk to and explain the situation to the young man. Damn, Holmquist is just hot...
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The letter from the Earl was most telling. I can see him moving to give Bertie and George some of the estate that is not entailed. I am not sure that would be much of the land but it might be quite a bit of money or other property. The Earl seems to have seen the light, let's up others do as well. I do find that Granger has a way of working his charm in every situation. I have to believe part of this is his birth and heritage but some is just what kind of person he is inside.
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Would have loved to be a fly on the wall in the room with Caroline going after Davina. I just adore how she moves to protect George and help him in his quest for greatness. I am going to be interested to see how the changes in personel effects the ship and his function. I do hope that it is all okay...
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Have to wonder what happened for Caroline to get a man like Sir Phillip to come all the way out to explain things to George. I have a feeling the issue with Bertie and Freddie has started to make waves in the family... Sir Phillip is hot but I still want Granger to have a chance with Chartley, there is just something about him that makes him and Granger seem good together..
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Granger handles himself with such dignity but he always makes sure to treat others they way they deserve to be treated and that will always pay dividens. I am glad that Ventura was still here and they got to spend a little time together...
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Granger seems can't help being who he is. I find the way he works to help others understand what is going on to be more than could be expected of any man in his position of that time. I hope the visit to this port goes better than it did last time...
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Ramsey is dead before Granger can even questions him. I am not sure what information he could have gotten but anything he could have provided about Davina would have been a help.
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Damn, I knew there was something about Ramsey that I did not trust. Davina is just a bitch, I have to wonder what else she is capable of. This is going to have repercussions all over the place...
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Just another reason that I don't trust Ramsey, I am not sure why but nothing since he was appointed to the ship has made sense about his being there. He seems to know things that someone in his position would not. I thought Granger handled the situation with the men and Gatling just perfectly. He even handled the discussion with Gatling afterward better than anyone else could have.
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Roberts is a brave man. I don't think this plan will work but it will keep Granger and Nelson out of harms way and let them continue their journey. I do have to wonder why he sent Gatling back, I wonder if there is something there...
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This was a chapter of passion and death. They flow together often like equal sides of a river. The battle was hard fought but Granger came out on top but not without loses. I do wonder where the Blanche got off to. It doesn't seem that they should have been that far from Granger and his ship.
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This was just a fun chapter to read. It just flowed and the conversation as written was just sparkling. I really enjoy those moments when Granger gets to host the dinner part and that fun side of him comes out...
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I would still like to know exactly what Ramsey is up to, he just seems to have to much information for someone of his position. I am going to miss Chartley. I am excited that Granger is going to Elba with Nelson, plus getting to be his flagship...
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I know that some people really seem to like Calvert but I just dream of the day a cannon ball puts him out of my misery. I am glad that Granger has arranged transport for Chartley all the way to England. His letter to Caroline should get her involved and make this a more even battle back home.
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Just when Granger was finding someone that might be his actual equal and be the right man for him, Calvert has to show up. I swear will this man just never die in battle or somewhere??? On top of that his behaviour is not doing anyone any favors. I have to wonder how Granger will play this.
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I have a feeling that by the time that Caroline and George enter the battle on the side of Bertie that Davina and Freddie may wish they had decided to play on the up and up. I do find this part of the story really fascinating. Chartley doesn't seem to be as recovered as I thought he would be at this point. I hope he makes it, he seems like the kind of person that Granger should be with...
