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  1. The only two members that I can think of off the top of my head that have been mentioned by name that are not on the list are: Iggy, Lord Calverton son of the Earl of Bromfield Marquess of Blankford, the son of the Duke of Marlborough Can anyone else think of any others? p.s. George Spencer-Churchill was the Marquess of Blandford, different spelling from this story, during the 1790's. He actually came into the title of the Duke of Marlborough in 1817 upon the death of his father. He was given the courtesy title of Marquess of Blandford upon his birth in 1866.
  2. This was a great chapter, I just can't believe that you are making Jardines the guide; you are just plain evil. I had thought of him but couldn't believe you would treat Granger like that, so I had discarded the thought... I have to wonder what Jardines can tell Granger that will excuse his actions in anyway??? I have always wondered if Travers and Teasdale did more than we knew before Travers was introduced to the Brotherhood??? Did Jardines walk in on them and that drove him mad; did Jardines love Teasdale as much as Teasdale seemed to care for him??? I have to say, I can't wait for Granger to get to Egypt. The Battle of the Nile is one of the three most important naval engagements in history, at least in my opinion. I can't wait to see how you tie Granger into the action. Great chapter and can't wait for the next one....
  3. This will be a great way to go back and have them all right at my fingertips...
  4. Okay, I don't even know where to start with this chapter, so here it goes.... I can't believe that JP hasn't made a move to broker some type of peace betweent he warring parties. I mean I understand him staying out of Stef's way with the party planning but I expected him to have seat down with those involved and tried to move things forward. Maybe he is waiting for after the party, but the longer a wound festers the harder to clear it becomes. I was thinking he was letting everyone marinate on what the problem was; but everyone seems solely focused on how it impacted them, not everyone else. I do think that Nana's statement may impact Claire, plus I think Jack is starting to turn the corner... I that Sharon is right on the money as always. I don't think Will is looking at the purchase of the house as anything other than bringing him closer to the one thing that centers him more than anything else, the ocean... He just has the ability to do it with more style than most others. I don't think Will buying the house is a message to anyone; although I can see it being one to others in their own mind. Plus, you know Stef will the the interior proud... Will and Scott are doing a dance that is gonna lead to something neither of them may really be ready for. Will has never been with someone like Scott and Scott has never done anything this dangerous. I don't know if they will really ever end up in bed together; a very bad idea but the ramifications will be interesting to see. Okay, I can even think of one or two reasons it wouldn't be so bad but that is on a totally different level of thinking... Brad will either be blind with fury or jealousy and I have to wonder which...
  5. All really great choices, yes even the damn song by untalented ones from Houston...
  6. centexhairysub

    Chapter 16

    Well, another chapter with more layers than a Royal Wedding cake; I just don't know where to start... Loved that JP was back, even for half a chapter. I have to admit I thought he would have taken more direct action by now to have brokered a peace between the warring parties. I can completely understand him staying out of Stef's way when planning the party of the new century. I am glad that Nana is back; JP needs someone like her around. I think that JJ probably wants to go to the party but wants to have everyone beg and plead with him to show up. This is a power move on his part and a well played one. I can't say that I am suprised that Will would want to buy a house on the beach in Hawaii. This would be the perfect situation for someone like him. I am not sure how suprised anyone will really be; plus you know that Stef can't wait to help him finish the interior. I can't decide if Scott and Will are really going to sleep together or not. I can give you a list longer than Will's appendage why it isn't a good idea; but I can see it really happening. I think if and when it happens the real question will be if Brad is mad or jealous??? Another wonderful entry and the double narration played perfectly...
  7. centexhairysub

    Chapter 46

    You are truly an evil little man.... I had already thought of Jardines making an appearance as the guide but did not think even you would do something so dastardly to poor innocent Granger... I have to say that I wonder if Granger isn't about to find out about Travers and Teasdale; I have long suspected that there was something there. Your ability to weave your story through the tangled web of history is just remarkable. This is one of the real talents that seperate you from so many others that practice their gift online. Can't wait to see what happens next....
  8. centexhairysub

    Chapter 15

    Great chapter with some interesting interplay between Fathers and Sons... I have to admit that Will and Brad can really push each other's buttons and great catch on Will's part to realize that and make a move to back down... Will be interesting to see who Will or Brad ends up with on this trip... LOL...
  9. centexhairysub

    Chapter 45

    Hmmm... Well, I certainly found this a happy suprise when I returned from dinner and movie... I have to think that Granger is right about the problems that the opium trade will/did bring to China and others. I have to say I am a little dissapointed that Chartley choose to go off and leave Granger. And I have to wonder who this mysterious guide is going to turn out to be??? Excellent chapter and can't wait to see where Granger is off to next...
  10. Well, I am not ready to write Tony off quite yet; although I do think he needs to spend some considerable time on a comfortable couch with someone truly objective to his situation... Tony is very much a product of his past and is having a harder than usual time figuring out who he is, what he wants, and where he is going in life. I agree that Will can and probably will stay involved with Tony to some degree but he won't put up with being anyone's doormat. Not sure that I see Mason as someone that will be around for more than this story; he does strike me as interesting but his and Will's interaction was in that brief period of meeting and first impressions where it is very easy to cover up any problems with smiles and sunshine. Will has so many people already in his sphere of influence that I am not sure there is room for another majore player. While I don't think Will handled the situation in the last chapter appropriately at all; I do think he did better at stepping back and deciding to do something that he wanted just because he wanted to. He went with Mason because it was light and fun and no drama allowed. Will needs to start making a decision about why he gets involved with someone of the men/boys that he does. Some of the choices make me really question his ability to think farther than the next sex act...
  11. Not sure I would have ever called Shania country but do love all your choices for this chapter except the one previously noted hatred of all things Beyonce...
  12. centexhairysub

    Chapter 14

    Mason enters stage right as Tony exits stage left??? I think Will really enjoyed his time with Mason but have to wonder how much of the real person he got to see... It is easy to keep a facade up for a few days and make everything sunshine and lollypops but harder to do over a length of time. I sort of doubt we really have seen the last of Tony. I think Tony needs to spend some time on a couch talking about his problems with someone objective. He needs to decide what kind of person he really wants to be. Great chapter and really enjoyed the calmer interlude at the end...
  13. I laughed till I damn near pissed my pants... God, you are brilliant...
  14. Calvert performed above expectations, at least from me. He handled himself well enough but without that certain something that Granger seems to have. Gatling did exceedingly well, the fact that he had the Spanish crew practicing the guns may have saved the day somewhat, although the Santa Clarita should have been able to handle most of the problems, as they did. Maybe Calvert can fall madly in love with Gatling and Gatling will realize that Calvert isn't so bad; and they can be together and leave Granger well enough alone....
  15. centexhairysub

    Chapter 44

    Well, I guess overall Calvert did okay... I do respect how he handled the situation with the Spanish Captain, even though he doesn't have the flourish that Granger would. He also did make sure that Gatling was aware of how he wanted to work things so that the ships could work in tandem to hold off any force; this was good forsight on his part. I was very impressed that Gatling had been drilling the Spanish crew on the guns to make sure if something happened that they would be better prepared to assist the Santa Clarita. I have always thought that Gatling showed great promise. I actually think maybe he and Calvert should become lovers and realize that they are meant only for each other... LOL... I hope there isn't any repercussions for anyone in regards to how they had to handle the situation with the Vulture. The officers on that ship got exactly what they deserved although the men may not have deserved their fate...
  16. Somers is the cousin of Sir Phillip Kerry. They had a very hot threeway with Granger on his trip back from the battle of St Vincent. I think Granger cares deeply for Cavendish but I don't think he is his person he is destined to be with. Cavendish will be someone that Granger always cares about and on a certain level, they are extremely well suited for each other. The problem is that whomever Granger ultimately ends up with, along with Caroline, will have to challenge him in some way and I don't see Cavendish doing that. I thought from the moment he was introduced that Chartley would be the man for Granger. I loved Travers best but had he lived they could never have been together in the long run. There was just to many things pulling them apart. Chartley and Granger have a certain spark that for me at least Granger is missing with Cavendish. p.s. I don't think Chartley is as old as Travers was. My impression is that Chartley and Bertie are probably the same age and Travers would have been a year or two older...
  17. I really can't see Tony being killed off at this point. We have all had those people in our lives that drive us crazy but there is something about them that always pulls us back into their sphere of influence. I don't know that Will and Tony will spend a decade doing the will they or won't they dance but I can't see them really disappering out of each other's lives either. They are just at very different points in their respective lives and are not in a place to be good together right now; that doesn't mean that ten years from now they won't being have a ceremony and pledging undying love for one another. Right now, Will is just more mature and sure of himself than Tony; the problem is as his actions in this chapter proved, he isn't as mature or as in control of his life and reactions as he thought he was... Will is very extremely mature for his age but he is just shy of being fifteen and just doesn't have the experience to handle or view each situation in a rational and calm manner. I think that methodwriter is right; the cultures with heavy machismo often encourage the men to cheat on whomever they are with. The problem is that they view the partner doing the same thing in a completely negative context. Tony has a double issue of being brought up in a culture that teaches him it is okay to cheat but his partner can't; plus he has the history of his father's behaviour and how that affected everything in the early years of his life...
  18. Hmmm, all were interesting picks... I really always liked Duran Duran and Toni Braxton is great but I hate Destiny's Child and truly despise Beyonce Knowles. She is a great example of someone with little to no talent making it big by having a big ass and willing to stab anyone and everyone in the back....
  19. centexhairysub

    Chapter 13

    Well, I loved the writing and how this moved the story along but this was a bitch of a chapter... I hate it but Will and Tony are in such different places in their live that they can't be together at this time. I am not sure they will ever be in the same place and the same time but that might happen in the future. I hate that Will acted out in a manner that was somewhat tied to how Tony was handling everything. I think if Will had just gone on the trip and not messed around with anyone, including Tony; it would have sent Tony a much louder message. Will is more mature than Tony but maybe not as mature as he or I thought he was before this...
  20. Well, I have to think that Westie is right and that Granger will find a way to play a part in the Battle of the Nile. This would give him a way to claim some additional glory and get a hold of a ship that would be able to intercept Bacchante and rip those letters from Maidstone's hands himself. I personally hope that Chartley and Granger use this trip to realize that they are meant for each other and are truly the other's soulmate. Calvert will survive, Mark spoiled that in a review response, but his latest assignment will undoubtedly enable him to get another command and he did so well in the Far East that might be a good posting for him again... I actually sort of see Granger missing Maidstone and Caroline waiting on the dock for him with a duelling pistols. I am not sure that Maidstone is a match for Caroline when she is trying to protect George and the family...
  21. centexhairysub

    Chapter 43

    Gay Porn Heroin, I loved it but if I am going to be pricked by something I would prefer it not be a needle... LOL... I really enjoyed this chapter. Granger was able to come up with a plan that might really work, provided they move swiftly enough and suffer no additional delays. Bertie is going to return to India and get his new assignment, a posting in China perhaps? Somers is staying on the island and will work closely with the Dutch resident. Chartley, Granger's true soul mate, will be traveling back to England overland with Granger and Winkler and a studly young American.... I do wonder about Calvert's delay. I hope nothing unexpected happened when he and Santa Clarita encountered the Vulture... Can't wait for the next part of the adventure...
  22. I would feel just terrible when the bullet actually went through Maidstone and killed Calvert as well... I am sure Granger could arrange a lovely military honor for him....
  23. This was one of the things I really missed not having access to my computer. I could get the stories but to get onto any of the forums on my phone was just such a pain... I really missed seeing what music you selected for each chapter. So glad to see you use Tapestry by Carole King, one of my all time favorites, and I agree about Robbie Williams, he was quite good; plus anything with REM was just perfect...
  24. Well, I am so glad to have the first confrontation with Dana behind Tony. I just don't for a minute believe it will be the last one. Dana strikes me as the kind of person that believes no one could do better than her. That kind of person always seeks revenge when it ends, especially when it is done in public like this one was. I thought Will handled everything from Dana to Rick to Mason really well and maturely. Will is going to have to be the one that decides if the drama involved will be worth having a relationship with Tony. If Will does stay in St Louis for a couple of weeks, he may have a better idea of what is ahead between him and Tony. I have to wonder if Tony does go ahead and come out, if he won't go through a slut period. I have seen that more than once when someone that hide who they were for a long time finally comes out, they just go wild sleeping with everyone. It doesn't always last very long but it isn't that unusual of an event.
  25. I am pretty sure that Stef is who introuduced Cody to Jackie. If I remember correctly she was more Stef's friend that Greg's. Greg never seemed to care for Jackie but Stef had been friends with her since he was involved with Peter, this was before Stef and Greg got together.
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