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Oh my God. What a situation to be in. I feel these guys are much more mature than me to be able to do this. Thanks for developing such strong yet empathetic characters. I don't know if I need a tissue or a scotch (and I don't drink) A very tense chapter, thank you.
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Lost this comment before but just wanted to thank justin4fun for the emotionally charged chapter. I was blindsided by Charlie and the situation. I think it neatly segues into the next book which I inadvertently stumbled into while writing this originally. Thanks for the story.
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Wow. I lost my response to the last chapter of Re-Forging and came up with this. From the heart ache of Charlie's loss to anticipation of the continuing story. Thank you for this story.
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Thanks for the story. Evocative writing which transported me back to the angst filled little 16 year old pro-queen I was. I didn't realize it then of course, but a story like this would have had me sniffling for weeks. I'm so glad he got his guy (guys) as we all hope at that age. Also Ronxy sets out the interpersonal relationships in a realistic fashion. The sister's bitchiness doesn't go away, mother's aggression is still there, Seth's self doubt and centredness is still there, work still needs to be done with the psychs. Thanks for a pretty realistic portrayal of one teens' adolescence.
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Really happy that you're on the mend. Thanks a lot for writing this story.
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Thanks for the story. Seems to be an interesting storyline and like the others I'd like to read the original. The characters are nicely rounded and I thought developing along a teen romance route until we got to the fall. Fangs for that.
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And a very Merry Christmas with the promise of new adventures in the New Year. Geron, you resolved the conflict in Lanes personality very nicely. Thank you. I love that everybody wins and Lanes hell will become his heaven, his life which he had stolen from him. And we have new friends in Rance Eleanore and Jol to involve in new adventures. And new team members.
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Lovely take on Cindafella. Enjoyed the fact that the new in-laws looked to be accepting as well.
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A very nice story which took me back many years. The people you created are living the same experience anyone could and making the most. True love finds a way. I especially liked the gentle way you handled the unwanted but appreciated interest of the friends. 👍
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Well thank you for this surprise. Needed a little brightening of the spirits and you provided. Thanks for the lack of seasonal angst as the characters could have been quite frightening considering Lanes temperament. Enjoy the season as you can and thanks for the stories.
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Hi, Happy Holidays or Christmas. Hope you're travelling Ok at the moment. Good luck in 2023 and thanks for the stories. 👍
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Thanks Mark for a typically packed chapter. It was lovely to see the characters interacting in companionable good humour in spite of the difficulties. Wishing you every good wish for the festive season. Many thanks for your labour in presenting such an enjoyable tale.
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Thanks for the Northern Exposure update. Looks like Granger is establishing a few new "relationships" which bode well for further adventures. It is a pleasure that Daventry and Granger are getting to spend quality time as well. As a fellow subject of "Our Queen" I also extend condolences to you as I know I have been surprised at the extend of my grief as I'd counted myself as quite the republican in Australia.
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I hope you enjoy your break/hiatus/whatever. You deserve unreserved thanks for the work you have done for we your undeserving readers. The last chapter was very light and breezy. Just enough titillation to whet our appetites for more. It was nice to get to know Adele and her partner a bit more as well. Again thanks
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Thanks for this chapter and the reintroduction to CJ's world. I especially like your descriptive evocations of alcohol characteristics. I can't tolerate alcohol but reading of the characters enjoyment takes me back to the times I had tried various drinks. I've never read a better description of bourbon. It makes me laugh as I drank Old Crow and my mate loved Jim Beam. Don't miss the headaches though. Its good that Oz and CJ will have a little Roo around to keep them on the straight and narrow.
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Thanks for another beginning. Tied in the previous stories very well. The interplay with all the characters was very light especially following the harrowing experience of Mexico. Looks like another insightful trip to America via Carlos. Thank you
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Thanks for an enjoyable read. I,ve met a few cinema people and thoroughly enjoyed your sharing of that world.
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Just completed the re read and yes, I agree this story is brilliant. The weaving of the recent events improved the narrative so that a non-American (Aussie) was able to understand the American psyche as displayed. I found the characters super, as in extaordinary and very appealing.
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A great yarn. Thanks for the involved and evolving characters.
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Hi , just re reading some chapters, Thanks again and hope all is good for you.
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Another very well written and thought provoking chapter. Thanks very much for the reflection on the characters. It's induced me to reread previous chapters.
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Thanks for this and all the previous chapters. Enjoyed them😃
