In Hostage the charaters have 'abilities' like being able to manipulate stone and water to make it change form and to manipulate minds and emotions. It kind of an alternate reality with more technology and different world structure. You could give it a try.
YAY another Welishie. I'm from South Wales too so Yay for us
Seriously, welcome to the forum. My advice is always listen to Cia's advice; she's aweseome. Relax take a look around and I'll look forward to reading your story when you post. There are some really good and helpful faq's that will help you get started. What I do is open two windows and then flick back and forth as I follow the steps.
Good luck
Sigh. Nice. These guys are SO good together. They are without doubt my favourite couple apart from my RIver and Silver. One of the things I really really like about this story is that there are lots of people in it, not just the two main characters. In fact by the time we gt to where we are now there are more than two main characters. The whole web of interconnected people are so well drawn that it makes me feel as if I am part of the family.
This part of the story is very interesting and very gripping. It shows things. in a way. from the other side of the wall. The way that something like this affects the family.
Interesting. We are finding out more about Dave and getting inside Vic's head. That's an experience in itself. There is a scary foreshadowing thought... he can make them believe he's okay... uh oh
In some ways i think that the end of this story is no end at all... it's lucky I've written another and will be writing a third Thanks for your review hun...a lot
Well, I can please and disappoint you. There is another story that starts straight after this one ends. The next story has more of Rover and brings him some relief. However, it doesn't involve any search for Glory's people... yet. That's planned for the third story which is planned but not written yet... I had to back to Enigma III and finish that and now I have a secret project but rest assured it will get written, it has to
Thank you. That was a wonderful summing up of a chapter I found great fun to write. I was a little concerned that people wouldn't understand the sudden change in Sar and I'm so glad you understood.
Did i write that at the end of the chapter. That's weird because i don't remember doing that. I had a little trouble posting this one so maybe it slipped in there. I thought I wrote that about an earlier chapter. Besides, the last chapter is only the last chapter for now so...
I should have known the moment was too perfect. The door doesn’t so much open as get flung aside as Sartorian sweeps into the room followed more calmly by Fougue.
“I’m telling you Fougue I’m not swallowing your crap any more. You either know what you’re doing or you don’t... and if you don’t it’s time I find someone who does. I’m not going to just sit and...”
Why has he just stopped? It’s not just that he’s stopped talking; he’s stopped altogether, frozen in the middle of the room, staring at