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Nephylim

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  1. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    I wouldn't want you to gush To be fair this one is a contination of the last so you can hardly blame me for that Thanks for the review as always hun
  2. Gods I’m glad to get out of there, not that it’s that much better out here. There is a LOT of smoke. On wow, the smoke is eddying and I get to see Felix clearly for the first time. He’s taller than me; about the same size as Sar and not as slender as I’d thought. He looks sleek and toned; not what we usually find in cages. His hair is tawny and seems to be striped, although it is difficult to tell, as it is woven with feathers and twisted scraps of brightly coloured cloth. And his eyes... oh my
  3. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    There is a lot of humour at least at the start of this one and mostly at Glory's expense. Poor kit. I'm glad you continue to like my Glory story
  4. I object to the above post..... I'm over 30 so why can't i dress as a whore if I want to? We always go all out for Halloween. This year Ef is going to be a goblin I think... with a sword of course. We're going to put up out decorations on Sunday and have our party then, because Lori has to work so she won't be here Monday night. We are going to stay up until midnight and have our ritual at the 'witching hour', that was Ef's idea. Samhuinn is my favourite festival next to the Winter Solstice and I love the whole 'feel' of it. I don't know if I am going to dress up or just wear my hat
  5. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    Liam is more than a bastard. he's inhuman and definitely inhumane Glad you're still liking it. It gets worse... or better depending on your POV
  6. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    Haha. Thanks hun. Don't spread around the rumour about me being good, I have reputation to maintain after all. I know... crazy isn't it. A dog called Rover and a cat called Felix. How cliche
  7. I got with my first husband at 16, married at 18 while still at school and divorced at 28 after ten great years and a wonderful daughter (whom I had at 22 and was NOT the reason I married) Marrying young CAN work but, as my own experience showed, both change and if you change in different ways the relationship eventually fails. Although, if, as in my case, it was simply a matter of changing in different directions it makes a good break up and lasting friendship possible. And, although it's not exactly on topic it does, I think kind of touch on the bisexuality issue because the reason for the change might be a growing realisation of your bisexuality and a need for a different sex partner. In my case that was a tiny part of the change but in others it might be more
  8. You're young; you have time. Dreams are something to aim for, to create and glory in; to change the mundane to the special, the impossible to the possible. If you start the job feeling that you are going to hate it then you will. Throw yourself into the job with as much enthusiasm and will as you can. Instead of looking for the negatives focus on the positives. There has to be SOMETHING you like even if it's only a really nice coffee shop across the road that you can have lunch in every day to provide a bright spot. Go to work every day knowing it is one day closer to your dream. One more day's pay in the bank. If you hate London so much look for a job somewhere else. It's very expensive to live in London. Stay where you are until you can find somewhere else but look around in other parts of the Country where the standard of living is lower. You could easily get that salary elsewhere. Take a look at Cardiff. It's beautiful city and we are a very friendly lot. Life is fast for me but slow for London. Make sure you have enough money to last you for at least a year in case things are slow to take off. Buy the land while you are still working and do as much preparation as you can while there is still a wage coming in. Try not to borrow money as the least debt you have when you start your business the better. It could take years but think how many years will lie ahead with a successful business supporting you. A little time and patience now will pay dividends in the future.
  9. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    Thank you. I wrote this one only a little while after the last one and I was, and am, so into Glory. I don't know why I went astray with part 3 but there is only the sketchiest idea in my mind as to where I want to go with it. It will get written, no doubt about that. I hope I get it done before I finish posting this one.
  10. Glory, the Aurix has been bonded to Sartorian, a powerful vampires for the last six months and has settled in to Sar's home full of misfits and outcasts. At a visit to the circus he meets Felix and, for the second time, his world changed dramatically. Love, romance, adventure and some laughs await our friends in a roller coaster of a story.
  11. I’m so excited. My heart is pounding and my senses are so acute they are throbbing: the flashing lights; the heat; the smells of burning and fear. I love it. I think this might be my favourite thing about being with Sar, well apart from the sex of course; that’s so good I can’t even think about it without getting... well...tight. Nope... not a good idea to think of that right now. Concentrate Glory; it’s almost time. I don’t understand why Sar makes me wait until they’ve secured the site. I can
  12. OMG BABY IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY.
  13. Dixton so deserved to end the way he did. I'm so worried about Teasel. Go Apple
  14. Well thank you. That was an awesome review. I'm really glad you got such a kick out of it. And there's absolutely nothing wrong with finding angels hotter than vampires, besides, with the exception of Rapha'el... oh, and Abdi'el they are all fallen ones And how could I possibly kill Bridge when he had such an awesome destiny. I don't think he was ever dying, not really. Maybe his human form but his fey form would never have died. I'm glad you love him because I love him so utterly and he is my favourite character in this story, although it should have been Luma I'm glad all the name changes didn't throw you
  15. Nephylim

    Chapter 16

    I feel warm and fuzzy now and it's a great way to start a day. I'm definitely purring. Thank you so much for such a lovely review. I'm glad you liked the last chapter when GLory gets some peace at last. It doesn't last, of course, the peace that is, as you will soon find out.
  16. Happy Happy Birthday
  17. I don't think the name change is any problem at all. I love Phoenix. It was a thrill to find out that the dream wasn't a dream after all. I have my suspicions about Damien's past which are very exciting even if they are wrong. The story is taking lots of twists and turns and there are some cool surprising. I am liking the story a lot
  18. Well, that was different. By the end of the chapter I had forgotten it was a dream and the knife came as a huge shock. Very nice start and i can't tell you if there were any errors because I was too busy reading the story Wonderful start
  19. You made the first time special for us as well as for them. I am still totally in love with Kaleb.
  20. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    Wow. I can feel the sparks fly and the chemistry fizz. You form very realistic characters. I can 'see' JR and Artan and feel so happy for them. And all the others too. An interesting biopic and an entertaining read. Ahh the ceilidh; I haven't been to one of them for years. I used to love the Gay Gordons.
  21. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Great end to the story. I strongly advise you to find an editor to polish the story and it will be something to be truly proud of, not that it isn't now but with a little work it could be a lot better.
  22. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    There's nothing wrong with the sex scene at all. Quite often less is more. I liked this chapter a lot. It was better than the last one in that it gripped from beginning to end and needed less editing.
  23. Nephylim

    My Angel My Devil

    Very nice. It captures the feeling of insecurity very well
  24. Sorry you were crying but it makes me satisfied to know that my stories get a reaction from my readers. At least you're not bored
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