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Wow, Alpha @kbois that was a superb end (part one of) to this great story. I was pleased with how Alberts and the Nichols Clan were "ended" - Reilly got his deserved retribution on his "father" and "brothers". Vann is going to have great role models in Seb & Reilly - he will eventually find out that Caleb The Traitor is his "father" and he may even be able to forgive him for what he did. I'm really looking forward to the TWO new stories in The Sentinel World - I know they'll be just as great as this one - especially with @Danilo Syrtisand @Mrsgnomieto keep you on the straight and narrow! P.S. I loved the bedroom scene between Reilly & Seb - very hot!!!
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So Alberts & Nichols must be put to death - but how and who will be the one(s) to do it? Will Reilly be asked to end his father and Seb do the same to Alberts? Should it be quick (too good for them) or long & slow (cruel & unusual punishment and descending to how they had treated the kidnapped pups)? How about we use Calebs' rocket scientists and shoot them both in to space or just burn them up in the blast from a rocket test? Now, what about Caleb? A father trying to save his son but betraying his whole pack in the process. Caleb knows that the pack is no longer his to control - his punishment; death, would deny Vann his real father, banishment - the same effect. I really don't know how to deal with Caleb! Seb & Reilly with the help of Kellan/Hunter & Ben/Zev will be great as the leaders of the new Council while they search out and close down those elements of the Pup Exploitation Ring still active or at large. With only one chapter still to come there are still a lot of loose ends to tie up! All hail to Alpha @kbois on such a great story!
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Chapter 1: Evaluating Evidence
Howzat commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 1: Evaluating Evidence
I think subconsciously you knew it was me which is why you mentioned it in your reply to my comment. I'm also rather pleased that you have that story title gently steaming on a back-burner somewhere! -
Chapter 1: Evaluating Evidence
Howzat commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 1: Evaluating Evidence
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Chapter 1: Evaluating Evidence
Howzat commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 1: Evaluating Evidence
Yay - it's great to see them all back again. I too had to re-read the ending of the previous story just to refresh myself. Then straight in to this chapter and ZAP! before I knew it, this chapter was done and dusted! I want to give Vinnie a hug! Great to see this series back again @astone2292! -
@Carlos HazdayThis must be an American thing as I've never named any of the 6 cars I've owned in my life. Though I suppose size (of vehicles) may come in to it - I mean you're never going to give a Mini a name like Heinrich! (Though I've never owned a Mini) 😁
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Loved the battle scene and how the Sentinels knew how to work together instinctively. Alberts, the Nichols (those that are left) and anyone else deemed to be held ultimately responsible for these heinous crimes should be despatched forthwith and their ashes scattered to the winds so that no memorial remains. As we near the end of this tale (I can't believe it's come around so quickly) may I just say to Supreme Alpha @kbois BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! What an excellent story and I'm really looking forward to the next book (even though you say it won't involve our favourite sextet very much).
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Now back to what started this whole thing - Alpha@kboisgetting drunk and letting @Mrsgnomiegoad her into posting this chapter early! I hope you learnt your lesson Alpha! If it was me I'd make us all wait until THURSDAY for the next chapter!! (That also gives you a bit more time for editing 😇) But if you do decide to go with your original posting day of Wednesday then who am I to say you shouldn't! I only spotted one, very small, spelling mistake - I'll message you now.
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I completely forgot about Wayne & Sandi - though they are being guarded by Dustin so they've probably dealt with him by now!
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OMG - the boys & Donovan back at the house! They're all in terrible danger!!
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@Mrsgnomiedo you mean that @kboisis a mole? Who is she "moling" for?
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OMG! I was so not expecting that! CALEB is the m f s o a b who's been helping Nichols???? WTAF! Alpha @kboisyou have outdone yourself with that HUGE plot twist 😢 OR - You're totally playing mind games with us? 🤪 I don't know what to believe anymore!! Wednesday can't get here quickly enough. PS - apologies for all the expletives above (which is why you've only got the first letters - I don't want the GA Mods breathing down my neck!)
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Oh goody - Alpha @kboisis awake! Chapter 21 must be on its way!!
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I assume it won't be the Mar-a-Lago club?? 😁
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Does anyone remember the very funny American sitcom - SOAP, that we used to get here in the UK? Starred Billy Crystal and lots of others I now can't remember. They used to end the program just like that. I've just seen @spykegot there before me! (I used to love watching that program but it was always on so late here and I was still at school!)
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Loved the chapter and Alpha @kbois(a.k.a. Mrs Cliffhanger) has left us with another one - but now we're at the same point in both story strands; Elijah being taken from his bed and the morning after when Ben/Zev are told about it. I'm sure Seb's ability to push the feeling of calmness to Ben & Zev is probably a combination of being Alpha & one of the Sentinels - especially over that distance! We've yet to see what state Wayne & Sandi are in following Elijaj's kidnapping - I expect we'll get that on Sunday in Ch 21. I wonder if Ben & Zev would (if the situation was different) fancy a little "play" time with Connor?
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I read that chapter way too fast - I wasn't expecting Elijah to be taken the first night; Mrs Cliffhanger (a.k.a. Alpha @kbois) is back!! I've got a bad feeling about this!!!! I hope I'm wrong. 🤞 Now I'm not sure if I want to get to Thursday or not 😢 Great chapter as always.
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SPOILER ALERT - don't forget Snape actually turned out to be one of the good guys! I don't see Northman in that way at all!!
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CJ as President would probably be popular enough to remove (or at least amend) the 22nd Amendment (which introduced term limits in 1947) so that he could serve at least as long as FDR. Perhaps he could even introduce familial succession - doing away with those pesky elections! Next - President Liebe!
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I always love a longer chapter as I can immerse myself in the characters and plot before TRW (The Real World) comes round to bite me in the proverbial! Alpha @kboismust be rubbing her hands with glee with all the cliffhanger potential coming along! Next week - Monday, Thursday & Sunday will all have cliffhangers I expect.
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I don't think we're at all surprised that @kboishas you on medication!
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Recipe 1 (serves 2 as starter or 1 as main) 15 lbs beef steak 5 bulbs garlic 3 lbs button mushrooms 10 large onions 10 lbs kale Slice the onions and make into onion rings (however you like them, battered or plain fried) Peel and crush the garlic and start frying in a little oil in the largest pan you have Add the mushrooms to the garlic and lightly fry until starting to colour - put aside into a large bowl (keeping it warm) Place the steak into the pan and flash fry for no more than a minute on both sides Serve the steak covered with the garlic mushrooms and onion rings - customers should have shifted into their wolf to consume. Result - two very happy wolves (or one very happy wolf if a main course) What happened to the 10 lbs kale I hear you ask - we threw that away - WOLVES DO NOT EAT KALE!!!!!
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Well that would be a start - a shifter themed cookbook! All the portion sizes would be XXXXL!
