The Poetry of D/s - 4. Yours

Fantastic poem, tim. You can see and feel the love that's built into the words.

simple words woven with such beauty and love. most powerful, tim. i'm glad you shared it

truly

no words

smiles, joyful tears

the last 8 words hit my heart

❤ ❤ ❤

Though there is nothing simple about letting go and giving in completely - about trusting, and just knowing, this poem was simply wonderful in conveying all of it. 

15 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

Fantastic poem, tim. You can see and feel the love that's built into the words.

Thank you, A. Things are so very good these days.. 

15 hours ago, mogwhy said:

simple words woven with such beauty and love. most powerful, tim. i'm glad you shared it

Thank you. 

14 hours ago, mollyhousemouse said:

truly

no words

smiles, joyful tears

the last 8 words hit my heart

❤ ❤ ❤

 

you, of course will understand ...  

14 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Thank you, tim. This a beautiful expression of utter trust and love. 

thank you, Parker. i appreciate you reading .. it's been a long time coming

14 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

Strong feelings and emotions are so very evident in these words. Peace, contentment, security. All is right with the world...at last.

 

tim, your words painted a truly wonderful picture.  

At last ... Michael is a patient man. Thanks for all of your support xo

11 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

Though there is nothing simple about letting go and giving in completely - about trusting, and just knowing, this poem was simply wonderful in conveying all of it. 

No, you are right Def. Trusting, letting go .. submission is not easy ... i've fought myself and Michael for years... and i'm sure i will everyday but now i know i can give everything to Him. Thank you for all of your support xo

9 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

tim, you have come so far in the last months. Our lives are both richer because of your willingness to change and trust In me. We have much to experience together. I love you, boy. This poem speaks to me, deeply. Thank you, boy. 

i accepted this LIfe with You .. i know it's not always been a smooth path, i am learning and my trust in You has never been greater. thank You, Sir. i am grateful xo

Lovely tim. I am happy for you both.

6 minutes ago, dughlas said:

Lovely tim. I am happy for you both.

thanks dugh ... things are good for us, xo

So many of the comments express my feelings. I will just say well done and thank you.

8 hours ago, JeffreyL said:

So many of the comments express my feelings. I will just say well done and thank you.

thanks to you as well, JeffreyL  i appreciate you reading these very much xo