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Box Shaped Heart - 35. Epilogue

Epilogue

“Do you realize we are practically hiding in a closet?” Carter snickered.

Aron hushed him.

“They’ll find us,” his husband reproached.

“Of course they will,” Carter said matter-of-factly. “They have the dog with them. They’re already tracking us as we speak.”

“The fact that you’re making so much noise is not helping,” Aron glared.

“Okay, okay,” Carter agreed.

They stood in silence for a couple of seconds. There was no noise from outside. Well, they had found the perfect hiding place, in the closet under the stairs in Aron’s folks’ house. Great, they could relax a little.

“So,” he whispered, getting close to his husband, “what’s up?”

Aron circled his waist with one hand.

“Are you sure you want an honest reply to that? Because I know exactly what’s up right now, seeing that we’re all alone, in a confined place, and I only have to lean in like this and kiss you.”

Carter was pretty certain that they were going to smooch each other so loudly that their trackers were going to find them any moment now.

“So, should we schedule a date for tonight? After 10 am, when everyone’s finally asleep, just you and me, the dads’ bedroom, and a bottle of wine?” Aron nuzzled his neck.

“I’d rather have a beer,” Carter protested. “Haven’t had one in a while. Why am I always the designated driver?” he faked complaint.

“Because the kids prefer your driving style for some reason.”

“Well, I do take them everywhere they want,” Carter pointed out.

“Yeah. You’re soft,” Aron chuckled.

“Someone’s got to be. Hey, it’s like I’m the good cop, and you’re the bad cop!” Carter exclaimed.

His husband hushed him with another kiss.

Then, Aron stopped and frowned.

“Hey, why am I the bad cop?”

It was Carter’s turn to laugh.

“Frankly, I think they are a tiny bit afraid of you. Deidre told her friends in kindergarten that her dad is as big as a mountain. And that her daddy, aka me, is just a little smaller. Of course, that was an exaggeration. But they believed her.”

“I don’t think they are afraid,” Aron glared.

“They are. Although you wouldn’t believe Freddie and what kind of explanations he’s coming up with for your behavior.”

“My behavior?” Aron exclaimed.

This time, Carter hushed him.

“It’s okay. They need the ground rules,” Carter whispered, sneaking his hands under his husband’s t-shirt.

Even in his forties, Aron still had the same awesome hard body. Carter could feel himself drooling.

“Well, if it were after you, we would all sleep in the same bed and have the dog on top of us all. We would have zero sex life,” Aron said, but Carter knew him well enough to notice the bubble of laughter underneath it all.

“Good thing I have you to play the bad cop role. I would never be capable of doing that,” Carter mumbled, his attention arrested by the hard planes of Aron’s torso. “And I would not like a zero sex life either.”

“Hey, don’t you think they should have found us by now?” Aron caught his hands and listened intently. “What do you think they’re up to?”

Carter sighed.

“I bet they came up with some plan of dragging us out of our hiding place. I’m sure Freddie said something like ‘oh, let’s just let them get bored and hungry, and they will come out’. Yeah, I think so.”

“That boy,” Aron laughed. “I swear he’s smart beyond his years. And I know someone who’s exactly like that.”

“Or he’s just counting on his own experience of playing hide and seek,” Carter continued his train of thought. “He’s the one who got bored and hungry and came out of his hiding place after we almost turned the entire place upside down searching for him that one time when we played at home.”

Aron nodded with a smile.

“Should we play along?”

“Yeah,” Carter admitted. “We’ll have plenty of time to play adult games tonight. Plus, I don’t want to miss the chance of getting out of the closet together with my husband,” he linked his fingers with Aron’s.

Aron beamed at him.

“I’m sure they have already forgotten about us, but, yeah, how could I skip that?”

***

“Where is Freddie?” Carter asked his mom, the moment they were out in the yard.

“He is busy inspecting the place. I think he is currently interested in dendrology,” his mother pointed out at the boy now carefully looking at the big oak overlooking from their yard into the Ruskins’ lawn. “Just make sure he doesn’t climb it as you did back in the day,” she wagged the finger at him.

Carter just laughed and waved. But seriously, he wasn’t going to let Freddie give him a heart attack as he had probably given his mom that day.

“Hey, buddy,” he called and their son turned to look at him.

“Grandma was talking to granny and telling her that this tree has a hell of a story to tell,” Freddie pointed out at the old oak, somewhat accusingly. “Do trees tell stories? Do they talk?”

Carter moved to stand side by side with the boy.

“Did grandma said ‘hell’?” he eyed Freddie, and the boy just looked away and shrugged.

It was clear that the matter of talking trees was much more interesting than whatever lecture his daddy had in store for him.

“Okay, I can tell you that story. But let me tell you a secret,” he caressed the boy’s head. “That was just the beginning.”

“The beginning? I want to know the end,” Freddie replied.

“Hmm, are you still looking at the end of books first? I told you’re ruining all the fun that way,” Carter said, but he was not really scolding Freddie.

After all, he was doing exactly the same thing. Even now, as a complete grown up, married with children.

“I can tell you the end,” he said with a smile.

Freddie turned to stare at him. Carter took his and Aron’s son by the shoulders to guide him back to the big table where everyone, from three generations, was gathered around. Aron was bouncing Deidre on one knee, making their little girl squeal in delight, while the two grandmas were debating what to bring first, and the grandpas were absorbed with talking about the last night’s game.

Aron looked at him and smiled. The biggest smile in the world on the most beautiful face Carter had ever seen in his entire life, with no chance of having anyone surpass that in a thousand years or all eternity. He wasn’t sure.

“So, dad, the end? The story?” Freddie pulled at his sleeve.

“Ah, that’s easy,” Carter caressed their son’s head and took in once more the family picture in front of his eyes, especially Aron playing with their daughter. “The end is ... And they lived happily ever after.”

THE END

And that is all, my good people! I hope you liked the ending and you're ready to forgive me for the lack of smut. I just had this image of the happy family in my mind and thought it to be just right for the story's finale. 
 
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for reading my story, reacting to it, commenting on it, and everything you did to support it and me. As an author in the making, each time I finish a story, especially one as long as this, feels like a real victory. And I know some of you must feel sad because it ended, and I feel for you, I really do. It isn't easy for me to say goodbye to my characters either. Carter will always be a favorite child to me. 
 
But I will return with another story! And I hope that you will join me once more for yet another adventure. In the meantime, if you have the time and the disposition, please leave a review. I will be so grateful (imagine virtual cookies). 
 
And I also want to let you know that one of my stories is featured here, on GA, during this month! It's a fanfiction piece, but seeing how people have told me it could be read as a standalone story, I want to recommend it. It's called Nude Pics Please! and features two lovely guys who have troubles expressing their feelings for one another. If you want to have some extra fun and learn a few things about yours truly, on Monday, the 28th of January, my replies to Cia's questions about this story, and not only, will go live! I'm putting the link here, and if you follow the thread, I believe you will be notified when that happens:
PS - I hate goodbyes! (So this is not a goodbye, really!)
Copyright © 2018 Laura S. Fox; All Rights Reserved.
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7 hours ago, flyboi said:

Like they say all good things must come to an end... Hmmm whoever came up with that 

Anyways Laura  thank you for this adventure, twas awesome hope to see you again.

I'm really gonna miss carter

Bye for now

 

Hey, thank you for your support! Also, for the very lovely review you left for my story. I am really so grateful for it. And, of course, I hope you will continue to enjoy my works! Hugs!

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I have been checking if this story had been marked COMPLETED for awhile now. I was so glad to see it was when I checked yesterday. I binge read it all last night. Laura, your ability to suck a reader in is a gift.

Carter reminds me so much of how I envision my son to be when he is grown. He has Social Pragmatic Communication Disorder and has been receiving therapy to help him learn how to function in social situations. He is lucky in that he has many friends who make up his “Aron”.

Thank you for such amazing and quirky characters.

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Thank you so much Laura, your story reminds me so much of how I love my best friend. He is the only person that I trust with my life, and by the way he is straight. Carter and his box shaped heart remind me of myself and Aron is a perfect image of my best friend. They remind me of everything that's important to me in my life. Thanks so much again for the story, it's rather like a tour to my heart's deepest desire, and one never forgets a thing like that soon.

P.S English is only my second language, so I must sound a bit awkward

P.P.S I hope to see more amazing stories from you soon, I would like to have something to expect every week again.

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6 hours ago, My_Pretty_Kitty_Kat said:

I have been checking if this story had been marked COMPLETED for awhile now. I was so glad to see it was when I checked yesterday. I binge read it all last night. Laura, your ability to suck a reader in is a gift.

Carter reminds me so much of how I envision my son to be when he is grown. He has Social Pragmatic Communication Disorder and has been receiving therapy to help him learn how to function in social situations. He is lucky in that he has many friends who make up his “Aron”.

Thank you for such amazing and quirky characters.

 

Thank you so much for reading my story and taking the time to comment. I am glad to hear that your son receives the help and support he needs and deserves. Carter will always be a special character for me, and I think my affection for him and the internal place he came from made him so relatable for readers. I wish you and your family all the best! And again, thank you!

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5 hours ago, AJLOVE said:

Thank you so much Laura, your story reminds me so much of how I love my best friend. He is the only person that I trust with my life, and by the way he is straight. Carter and his box shaped heart remind me of myself and Aron is a perfect image of my best friend. They remind me of everything that's important to me in my life. Thanks so much again for the story, it's rather like a tour to my heart's deepest desire, and one never forgets a thing like that soon.

P.S English is only my second language, so I must sound a bit awkward

P.P.S I hope to see more amazing stories from you soon, I would like to have something to expect every week again.

 

Hey, I'm glad you enjoyed Box Shaped Heart and that you found yourself in the character. I had my fears when I started the story that he might not be easy to understand and that I won't able to convey through words all that I wanted so that I could present him in the light he deserved. But replies like yours and the lady's who commented just earlier truly make me feel that I managed to do the character justice, despite all my fears. 

 

Don't worry about sounding awkward in English, as I must sound the same since I'm not a Native English speaker, either (so you sound perfectly okay to me). Imagine that extra challenge when writing someone as complex as Carter, he, he. And I will return with new stories, which I hope you will enjoy, although they will be different (I tend to try different things, as they come to me).

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There were so many parts of this story that just had me laughing till I peed my pants. 😋 

 

From the first moment when Carter opened up his eyes in the hospital room, I was hooked. And I loved the Aaron Carter thingy going on, even though they were two different people, and Aaron was missing an ‘a’. Lol That’s the first person I thought of when I saw Aron and then Carter in the same line. Haha

 

Anyway, this was a wonderfully entertaining story, Laura, and I would have NEVER guessed you weren’t a native English speaker! You write soooooo well!! :)

 

Thank you for sharing your beautiful story with us. :)  

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15 hours ago, Lisa said:

There were so many parts of this story that just had me laughing till I peed my pants. 😋 

 

From the first moment when Carter opened up his eyes in the hospital room, I was hooked. And I loved the Aaron Carter thingy going on, even though they were two different people, and Aaron was missing an ‘a’. Lol That’s the first person I thought of when I saw Aron and then Carter in the same line. Haha

 

Anyway, this was a wonderfully entertaining story, Laura, and I would have NEVER guessed you weren’t a native English speaker! You write soooooo well!! :)

 

Thank you for sharing your beautiful story with us. :)  

 

From the very start, I wanted this to be a funny story, so the fact that you tell me I made you laugh is the greatest reward. As for the Aaron Carter thing ... so funny that it hadn't crossed my mind until some readers pointed it out, lol!

 

Thank you for not finding my English awkward or anything! I know I have still plenty to learn, but it's so good to be appreciated!

 

Thank you again for reading and commenting!

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7 hours ago, Laura S. Fox said:

 

From the very start, I wanted this to be a funny story, so the fact that you tell me I made you laugh is the greatest reward. As for the Aaron Carter thing ... so funny that it hadn't crossed my mind until some readers pointed it out, lol!

 

Thank you for not finding my English awkward or anything! I know I have still plenty to learn, but it's so good to be appreciated!

 

 

Back in the day, I used to LOVE Aaron Carter, and I used to listen to his CD all the time!!!! So naturally he would be the first person I thought of when I saw the two names of the MCs. 

 

And I swear, Laura, I would have NEVER guessed you weren’t born in the states from your writing! There are many, many, many native English speakers who don’t have as good a command of the English language as you do. :) I think the only thing I would point out was when you put ‘probably’ in front of the noun instead of after it. “Probably he thought...” instead of “He probably thought...”. See what I mean? Other than that — 👍👍.

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14 hours ago, Lisa said:

Back in the day, I used to LOVE Aaron Carter, and I used to listen to his CD all the time!!!! So naturally he would be the first person I thought of when I saw the two names of the MCs. 

 

And I swear, Laura, I would have NEVER guessed you weren’t born in the states from your writing! There are many, many, many native English speakers who don’t have as good a command of the English language as you do. :) I think the only thing I would point out was when you put ‘probably’ in front of the noun instead of after it. “Probably he thought...” instead of “He probably thought...”. See what I mean? Other than that — 👍👍.

 

Thanks for the tip, Lisa! Now that's something I'll remember from now on :)

 

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A very sweet, and fitting, ending. I was hoping they'd marry and eventually have kids.

I feel a little bit sad about Carter losing his memory of that body swap experience. But I guess it was the right thing to happen, now that everything was right.

I think Alex, too, will be better off now, without Aron. Clearly they didn't work well together.

Maybe he can find someone who can make him a better person? After all, this a big part of this story is about second chances. 

Thanks again for sharing this wonderful story with the rest of us.  😊

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23 hours ago, M1984 said:

A very sweet, and fitting, ending. I was hoping they'd marry and eventually have kids.

I feel a little bit sad about Carter losing his memory of that body swap experience. But I guess it was the right thing to happen, now that everything was right.

I think Alex, too, will be better off now, without Aron. Clearly they didn't work well together.

Maybe he can find someone who can make him a better person? After all, this a big part of this story is about second chances. 

Thanks again for sharing this wonderful story with the rest of us.  😊

Thank you for enduring through all 35 chapters! I know that my decision to make Carter forget about the body swap made some of the readers a bit sad just like you, but it was one of the first things I decided on since I wrote the first notes for this story. On the other hand, you can say that the 'dream theory' you had,was partially correct, because that was what it felt to Carter after Mark gives him the mints. Also, I wanted to point out that the most important things in life are the ones we should care about, leaving alone the clutter. (But maybe I was a bit too on the nose with that)

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On 12/12/2021 at 8:03 PM, Laura S. Fox said:

I didn't know that song before, but its lyrics are spot on!

It fits perfectly, after reading your note about the song, I listened to it for the first time in a while…. OMG yes it does, and that caused me to re-read the last 6 chapters, I’ve had the immense pleasure of reading nearly all of your stories, - and by the way…. You’re amazing. -  but for some reason this one just hit the spot for me, although still love Jett and April. Again thank you for sharing you’re amazing skill with us, thank you . 

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I think the highest praise I could give you, you gave me an idea I think I'm going to explore when I'm done working on my current story.

I really enjoyed the story until you brought in the kids...blech :) I looked the other way when the dog appeared, but I draw the lines at kids. 

Okay, all jokes aside now. 

Carter was a fun character and I loved his arguments with his brain, so many laugh out loud moments for me. As someone who doesn't believe in an afterlife or high power, I would have preferred a different explanation but I think you did a wonderful job at answering just enough questions without going into too much detail in regards to the body swapping and "angels". 

By the way, the speech Carter gives to Aron explaining about his heart and compartments, fucking really good and you got me, I teared up a bit. What a brilliant "you had me at hello moment". Really good writing. 

So I stopped commenting on every chapter as I tend to get so involved in the narrative my comments come across as negative, even though I really enjoyed this story and the ride you got me on. so thank you . 


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