Pride Month, and other Haibun - 8. Season

oh i like the parquet'd pavement!   Excellent, AC!

2 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

oh i like the parquet'd pavement!   Excellent, AC!

Thanks, Tim! Actually, that concept goes back to something @aditusposted quite a while back. Been simmering on the back burner until today, it popped out, like Hart Crane said words should for poets. Thanks for reading

That is brilliant, AC. And I like lofty winds playing with their clouds.  Just great! 

2 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

That is brilliant, AC. And I like lofty winds playing with their clouds.  Just great! 

Muah! Thank you, Mike

i hate days like that

they play with your emotions, make you start to think that the sun and her warmth are coming back

then you discover it was just a nasty joke

the images are so clear here, glad you were inspired to write  

11 minutes ago, mollyhousemouse said:

i hate days like that

they play with your emotions, make you start to think that the sun and her warmth are coming back

then you discover it was just a nasty joke

 

the images are so clear here, glad you were inspired to write  

Thanks for reading and commenting, Molly. I really appreciate it  

I like this one, for parquet’d pavement, and for the breath of spring in the midst of winter. Awesome. 

6 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

I like this one, for parquet’d pavement, and for the breath of spring in the midst of winter. Awesome. 

Thank you, Parker. I'm glad you read it

Your words created a beautiful picture in my mind. I can see the sun rays and hear the coming rain, which reminds of winter, but also is a reason to cherish the sun even more. An amazing play with the contrasts.

Thank you for sharing it. Muha 🙂

4 hours ago, Lyssa said:

Your words created a beautiful picture in my mind. I can see the sun rays and hear the coming rain, which reminds of winter, but also is a reason to cherish the sun even more. An amazing play with the contrasts.

Thank you for sharing it. Muha 🙂

Thank you for reading. I'm happy the images came through - muah