The Poetry of D/s - 9. fireflies and our Life

Beautiful as always. 

10 hours ago, Thorn Wilde said:

Beautiful as always. 

thanks  Thorn xoxo

9 hours ago, Kitt said:

Your love and trust in Mike are showing again!

thanks Kitt xo

5 hours ago, mayday said:

Beautiful. So expressive. The idea that you would not know the words to express your feelings has made me smile and laugh after reading your poems.

it is a feeling i cannot put words to properly .. this was close.  but i appreciate it made you smile and laugh.. thank you xoxo

5 hours ago, MacGreg said:

Wonderful poems, tim. Indeed, we do not play roles. This is who we are. And, despite any obstacles, it's a beautiful Life. Being open to reaching new levels of connection and obedience is a good outlook to have, my boy. So many opportunities for fulfillment out there when trust is in the forefront to guide you. 

 

Thank you for writing what's in your heart. 

Thank You, Sir.  saying how i feel, what i feel, has kept me quiet for a few days. this morning finally i was able to write these.  it still doesn't feel enough, but it's close. Thank You for your comments, Sir, this boy is grateful.

xo

5 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

What impressses me is that life you so eloquently and beautifully describe is indeed a relationship, not a role. You describe a way of loving and it lifts my spirit today. 

Oh, thanks Parker that is a beautiful thing to say. Thank you xo

5 hours ago, mollyhousemouse said:

describing the words as fireflies is such a wonderful analogy

i'm always delighted to read anything from you, but these were especially nice

xo

thanks very much molly ... i appreciate you reading and commenting xoxo

15 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

You found your words in these two poems, tim, because I heard and understood every word loud and clear.

 

No need for pondering today.  

Thank you very much Reader. i glad they worked. Thank you for your comments.  xoxoox

These are wonderful, tim.  I know you've been quiet and contemplating, these are a beautiful result of that silence.  And you're right, this is no game, our lives are not roles. And Mac also says it, it is a beautiful Life. Full of passion, and fulfillment. Thanks for these, boy. xo

Just now, MichaelS36 said:

These are wonderful, tim.  I know you've been quiet and contemplating, these are a beautiful result of that silence.  And you're right, this is no game, our lives are not roles. And Mac also says it, it is a beautiful Life. Full of passion, and fulfillment. Thanks for these, boy. xo

thank You Sir ... i know i've been quiet. i'm glad You enjoyed them. xoxo

As is often the case, your simple words show deep emotion and meaning. Beautifully written, Tim.

53 minutes ago, JeffreyL said:

As is often the case, your simple words show deep emotion and meaning. Beautifully written, Tim.

thank You Jeff ... i appreciate you reading these ... xo