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A Night with no Stars - 2. Name Your Poison

Thank you all very much for your comments under the last chapter and the prologue! Hope you'll enjoy it!

For the rest of the morning Maks felt a little numb, but apart from that he managed to get a grip. He made breakfast, trying very hard to erase the memory of the agitated kid rushing out of the woods as if someone was chasing him. He carefully considered all the scenarios of what could have happened, who Aleks was talking to, who else was where, who the phone belonged to and why it was so important. So many unknowns and no answers. He tried to drive away the thought that last night he slept under the same roof as someone who might have committed murder. Someone who now knew exactly where he lived and what was his name, while Maks didn’t know a thing about him. He was finding himself on the strong disadvantage. He also tried to get past this whole incident, just decide that it’s never happened and forget that his path ever crossed the path of mysterious Aleks. If it was even his name. Forgetting didn’t work very well though, so he turned off the TV, then turned it on and turned it back off. He couldn’t decide whether he wanted to know more or not.

He wondered what was happening to Aleks. Will the investigation lead them to him? Maybe it’ll lead them to Maks? ‘Calm down,’ he scolded himself internally. ‘You did nothing wrong.’ Well, he did have some information and kept it to himself. Did that already make him an accomplice? Jesus, what did he get himself into?

He didn’t notice when the noon came and went. He almost had a heart attack when the mailman buzzed the interphone. He picked up his correspondence and went back to spacing out on the couch. Around two pm he got up reluctantly to check his phone. There was a text from Ewelina, she was asking if he was coming with her to her friend’s birthday party. Her life has changed when he was in England, or rather her life kept changing and his was still the same. They used to both be outcasts, preferring their own company than anybody else’s. Now she was going clubbing with her girlfriends every weekend and Maks resigned himself to being the third wheel.

The second text was from the unknown number.

3:41 pm. From: *********. You didn’t do anything stupid, did you?

He didn’t sign it. He didn’t have to. Maks frowned, wondering how he got his number. He checked the history and there was a call from his phone to the same number yesterday at 2:36 am. How did he do it without Maks noticing?

He sighed, saving the number with a tiny smile. He was involuntarily relieved that Aleks didn’t drop off the face of the earth.

3:43 pm. To: Aleks. I thought I was supposed to forget about it.

3:44 pm. From: Aleks. Good, carry on then. Sorry, I was worried.

He read it several times. Now he was fucking worried? Worried about whom? Himself? Maks? The murderer? All of these were possible. Why was he even texting him if he was going to erase him from the picture and never mention it again? It didn’t make any sense.

3:44 pm. To: Aleks. You were worried about me? I’m touched.

3:46 pm. From: Aleks. What can I say, I’m a very thoughtful guy.

Fuck, it didn’t make any sense. Nothing would convince Maks that these words belonged to a person who would be able to shoot someone in cold blood. It wasn’t a face of a person who would be able to shoot someone in cold blood. His instinct couldn’t be so wrong. Aleks couldn’t do it. He was definitely involved somehow, but he wasn’t the culprit. Who was that guy who was shot? Maybe that would shed some light on this whole mess. He wasn’t going to help with the investigation, he wasn’t that suicidal, but gathering as much information as possible couldn’t hurt, right?

After short hesitation, he turned the TV back on.

 

***

 

If there was anything that made Maks loosen up, even though he wasn’t a very laid-back person, it was cooking. He was furiously mashing up avocado to a pulp, wondering what he was going to do with a huge bowl of guacamole, cause there was no chance that he could eat it all on his own, but it kept his mind off certain things, so it didn’t matter who will eat it.

He was still listening to the news with half an ear, only registering every third sentence. ‘Does the police have any lead? Unfortunately the police have no leads, but we are investigating this case incessantly.’ Maks didn’t even realize that he held his breath until he exhaled heavily. Aleks seemed to be safe for now. ‘The police identified the victim as a twenty eight years old Piotr R., resident of Praga-North.’ ‘Is it possible that it was a mob hit? Considering the victim’s identity, it is very likely.’ Maks winced. ‘What the fuck have you done, kiddo?’ he thought. ‘What the fuck are you doing to me?’

He kept listening and he felt that the more he was listening, the less he understood. And the less he understood, the more he started to panic. He was taking it all out on avocado, even if it wasn’t its fault, and tried to force the voices in his head to shut up. Before he only knew that he was scared, but now he also felt it, he actually felt this overpowering fear that it will not end on this one strange night. That because of one stupid decision he will end up in jail or somewhere with a bullet in his head, long-forgotten. It wasn’t impossible, right? It was even probable, because these people (whoever they were) didn’t leave loose ends. And definitely didn’t let guys like him be, after they turned up in the wrong place in the wrong time.

Was Aleks also in the wrong place in the wrong time? Or maybe it wasn’t an accident at all that he was there? He wasn’t sure if he wanted to know the answer to this question.

The doorbell rang. Maks jumped and the peeler cut his skin instead of a jalapeño pepper. He hissed and put his thumb in his mouth, turning around and staring at the door with loudly thumping heart. Who was that? Police? No, they wouldn’t find him so quickly. Could they know? Could anyone know that Aleks was here this morning? He checked the clock, it was close to six pm. Ok, just get a grip. He went to the door.

“Hi honey,” Ewelina said, entering without an invitation and craning her neck, waiting for a kiss. “You remember Aneta, right?” She pointed to the short blonde smiling shyly behind her. Maks blinked.

“Sure,” he lied. “Come on in.” Aneta was taking off her shoes when Ewelina grabbed his elbow and kissed him again. She was grinning a lot and seemed happy, maybe she was still dazed by the engagement, he suspected it was a woman thing. Or maybe it was because of a Saturday. She was always more joyful on a weekend and Maks wanted to tell her that there was nothing wrong with Mondays, people like her just blamed everything that was wrong in their worlds on this poor day because they hated their jobs. But he would never say it out loud.

“What happened?” she frowned.

'Nothing, babe, it’s just that there was a murder yesterday and I was practically there, I stopped the car and chatted for a moment with a guy who saw it or maybe even did it, and then took him back here and gave him a blanket, so he wouldn’t be cold. Nothing at all.’

Fuck, just pull yourself together. If there’s anything you’re good at, it’s pretending that everything’s ok. That you’re ok.

“Nothing, everything’s fine.” She went to the living room. He wasn’t sure if she was even listening to him.

“Come on, I can see you’re tense.” Damn, apparently she did. “You were cooking, and you didn’t have anyone to cook for, it always means you’re tense.” She declared, eyeing the guacamole. Why did she have to know him so well? “You’re worried about the interview?” Right, his job interview. He’s already completely forgotten. Would he even remember if she hadn’t mentioned it? Shit, he will have to write it down somewhere.

“Yeah, kind of,” he admitted, embarrassed, lying through his teeth. “You want some?” He tried to change the subject, taking out the plates. Aneta smiled kind of tenderly and gave Ewelina a significant look. Ewelina raised her eyebrows, as if she was saying ‘I told you so’. Maks didn’t even want to guess, because for some reason women always thought men that cooked were endearing. Almost as endearing as insecure men who openly admitted their insecurity. Maks was both, so he wouldn’t be surprised if they considered him cute as a puppy. He didn’t understand girls at all.

“What you’re watching…? Ugh,” Ewelina grimaced at the news. They’ve finally let the mysterious Warsaw murder go and now they were talking about the three logging. “’Kitchen revolutions’ is on.” She changed the channel. “So are you coming to the club or not? Let’s eat and go,” she decided and it was obvious to Maks that the negative answer wasn’t even an option.

“Sure,” he mumbled, not even curious where they were going. He didn’t remember the last time he was in the club. Bars, sure, back in collage, but if he had to interact with people, he preferred house parties. It’s not that he never had any fun, he did. He just didn’t like the crowds and the noise, and little punks spilling drinks on him, because he was unlucky enough that they always did.

But now Ewelina was a kind of girl that went clubbing and she was also his future wife, so it probably meant that he had to go clubbing. Shit.

He started to prepare the food, unlocking his phone in the meantime.

6:03 pm. To: Aleks. Yeah, right, like a little angel. Maybe yesterday I’d believe that.

After all… it wouldn’t hurt to write to him a little bit, right? He didn’t even start it, Aleks did. So it was fine. It was all fine.

 

***

 

He’s already known that he hated clubs, but apparently he wasn’t aware just how much he hated them. He was pursing his lips so hard they almost hurt and he ridiculously thought he should apologize to his own ear drums for the harm he caused them. On the bright side, he was particularly talented in going with the flow, that’s how he survived on Cambridge for as long as he did, and the same talent allowed him to navigate through this strange, ethereal place. He was wandering around with a bored expression, holding on to his glass of Jack Daniels, even though all ice cubes already melted. He smiled to someone from time to time, but mostly his eyes were following Ewelina and her friends shaking their hips, pretending not to have a care in the world. The truth was that they were flattered by all these guys approaching them and then leaving disappointed after realizing that they won’t score here, looking a whole lot less sultry than before, but just as vapid. Maks observed these theatrics with pity. Ewelina just sneaked out to take a quick drag, giggling like a teenager. Maks was hoping that they were smoking cigarettes and not something else.

It looked like his twenty four years old fiancée was just going through her rebellious stage. So there was that. It wasn’t all that surprising, she was always a sickeningly good girl, so it was bound to happen. But did it have to be right now, when she also agreed to marry him? She could say ‘no’ after all, it’s not like he would resent her for it or dump her if she provided him with a plausible explanation. He did it because of his mom anyway. Well, she wasn’t the only reason, but he told her that he thought of proposing and she went absolutely crazy. Before he got a chance to protest, she turned this casual idea into detailed plan. So what he was supposed to say? That he wasn’t sure? How could he not be sure after all this time? Besides, he was sure. Sure that it had to be done sooner or later, so why not now?

He took out his phone and smiled.

9:39 pm. From: Aleks. I can see a bright future ahead of you.

Right, Maks told him that he’s completely forgotten about his job interview. Suddenly he frowned when he remembered what Aleks said about revealing too much. And then he realized that it was the same Aleks who practically threatened him this morning and thought that he really played with fire. Apparently he was so sheltered that now he was living in a bubble, convinced that there was no such thing as danger and all people were nice and good like him. Well, every flaw could be blamed on parents.

He raised his head to find Ewelina, who just laughed and then shouted something in Aneta’s ear. Maks shook off unpleasant thoughts and decided that if people could do exciting shit, so could he. Exciting and dangerous. Yeah, it sounded good. Maks has never in his whole life done anything dangerous.

10:24 pm. To: Aleks. Judging by where I am right now, I don’t see a bright future ahead of myself.

He wasn’t waiting more than a few seconds for Aleks to take the bait.

10:24 pm. From: Aleks. Where are you?

10:24 pm. To: Aleks. In some stupid club.

10:25 pm. From: Aleks. But where?

This time Maks hesitated. Why did he want to know? Was he going to find him and put a knife to his throat in some dark alley?

Ok, that’s absurd. If Aleks wanted to get rid of him, he would find a lot more subtle way. And he wouldn’t wait until now, seeing as he had plenty of opportunities already. His own calmness despite his morbid thoughts was unnerving. Well, you only live once.

10:27 pm. To: Aleks. Some place on Mazowiecka. I don’t remember what it’s called.

10:27 pm. From: Aleks. Enclave?

Maks frowned. He wasn’t sure, but… probably.

10:27 pm. To: Aleks. I guess.

For a long moment he was holding his breath and waiting for an answer, but it never came, so he rolled his eyes and went to the bar to get a refill. He felt like he got a year older waiting in that line and exhaled with relief when he emerged victorious. Of course only for some idiot to run right into him when he was turning. Jack Daniels splashed on his hand and the front of his shirt. He was pretty sure that his offender got hit too, but fortunately he didn’t seem to be too pissed. That’s what Maks would expect from most of the regulars here, but this one only started to chuckle.

“Watch your whisky!” He leaned to be heard and Maks jerked at the sound of the familiar voice. Of course.

“What are you doing here?” he shouted back, because sure, it felt like he was standing in the line for a year, but in reality it hasn’t been more than ten minutes.

“I was just next door,” Aleks explained, shrugging and pulling him by an elbow. Maks followed him pliantly. “The best shot-bar around, I give five stars.” He was grinning widely. Maks didn’t understand that grin. Someone who had the police after them shouldn’t be grinning.

“That’s not what I meant,” he refuted even though that was actually his first thought, how Aleks managed to get here so quickly. “Do you have any specific business here or did you just miss me?”

“I thought I would buy you a drink. You know, as a ‘thank you’” Aleks offered presumptuously, still wearing that cheeky smirk. Maks wasn’t sure if he was supposed to be flattered or weirded out. He seemed different than last night and this morning, like this was a club approved version of him. A little more douchey and brash, and a little less nostalgic and frank. He also looked different, he traded the hoodie for a black coat. He was almost elegant with this disarrayed hair of his and smug look on his face. He seemed the more smug, the longer Maks was eyeing him up and down.

“Hey,” Ewelina panted, appearing out of nowhere with three of her friends in tow. Maks only knew Aneta by name. They were all staring at Aleks with burning curiosity. “Will you introduce me to your friend?” She demanded sweetly.

“Right, sure, this is Ewelina,” Maks said obediently, immediately pretending that introducing his fiancée to Aleks was something he was planning on doing all along, even though until now it didn’t even cross his mind. In fact now that it was forced on him, he realized that it probably wasn’t the best idea.

“Yes, of course, I’ve recognized. I’m Aleks,” Ewelina glanced at Maks suspiciously, but Aleks let him off the hook, still smiling charmingly. “What’s your poison, ladies?” Most of Ewelina’s girlfriends blushed and giggled shyly. Jesus, they didn’t even play hard to get if one of those dazzling smiles was enough for them. Aleks went to the bar and Ewelina leaned to Maks.

“Who is this guy?”

“We’ve met… a few weeks ago,” he made up without missing a beat. “Right after I got back. You know, just… briefly.”

“Briefly?” she repeated, sounding intrigued. “But he’s recognized me. Was he in your apartment or…”

“No, come on,” he huffed. This lie wasn’t exactly necessary, but Maks didn’t invite people to his place very often and was worried that she would consider it highly irregular. He decided to stick to the compliment, it was always a safe bet. “I was just telling him about you, so I had to brag how beautiful my fiancée is.” She seemed appeased and let him kiss her.

“So, have you already thought about the date?” A short brunette asked, leaning on the table next to them. Ewelina immediately cheered up.

“Yeah, I’ve checked everything and if we don’t want to get married in some shithole, there’s not much chance of booking something earlier than next August, but it doesn’t sound bad, does it?” she addressed Maks, who kept nodding furiously. “Like… a year and a half long engagement is reasonable, right?”

“Sure, August sounds perfect,” he assured dutifully.

“What’s in August?” Aleks asked out of polite interest, putting a tray full of multicolored shots in front of them. There must have been at least thirty of them and Maks’s eyes got cloudy. Aleks smiled with the air of superiority. “See, that’s how we do. Sipping Jack Daniels is for geriatrics.”

“Oooh, we like Aleks. Can we keep him?” Ewelina begged, turning her puppy eyes on Maks. He just scowled, because in his opinion keeping Aleks seemed like a terrible idea. “And we’re getting married in August,” she added complacently, answering his first question. To Maks it looked as if she couldn’t help herself but inform everybody about it, no matter if they wanted to know or not. Aleks raised his eyebrows.

“Oh, right! Maks mentioned something about proposing…” He pretended he was trying to remember. Ewelina brighten up.

“He did?”

“Yeah, yeah, he couldn’t wait to tell everyone” Aleks assured her, glancing at Maks significantly and looking like he was having a time of his life. Maks wasn’t. When the girls started to talk about the wedding, Aleks drew closer to him.

“How long do we know each other?” he whispered into his ear.

“Three weeks?” Maks figured.

“And where did we meet?”

“In Pavilions,” he decided firmly. “We have mutual friends.” Aleks snorted, looking doubtful, as if he was saying that there was no way in hell that the two of them had even one friend in common. He concurred eventually. After all not arousing Ewelina’s suspicion was as much in his best interest as it was in Maks’s.

The party went on. The girls drunk more than it seemed physically possible for their petite bodies and didn’t seem all that interested in going back to the dancefloor. Maks felt disappointed, because he hoped that he will have a chance to talk with Aleks alone, though he wasn’t sure why, apart from him being a stranger who kept texting him and joining his party instead of cutting him off. It didn’t make any sense and he just wanted to know why. Especially now that they were eternally labeled as best mates only because Maks was a compulsive liar and Aleks happily embraced the scam, making up more and more details about their short but apparently intense fake acquaintance.

It was obvious that Ewelina loved him. He also understood why, since she started to socialize, she felt bad that Maks didn’t have that many friends and was doing nothing to change that. He was an introvert, there were a few people whose company he didn’t find awful and that was enough for him. It’s never been an issue before, but now she seemed to feel guilty that she had her girlfriends and Maks was still pretty much alone. So no wonder that she was ecstatic now that she’s met a real-life buddy, and so cool and sharp one on top of that, who was going clubbing and was stylish and smooth-tongued, and seemed to be the kind of guy who was in high demand wherever he went. Maks wouldn’t be surprised if Aleks was her dream come true and he really wanted to tell her that it wasn’t a friend, it was just some random guy he stupidly invited to a sleepover and who by the way witnessed a murder, only so he could see her face.

Aleks on the other hand, who was clearly enjoying their shenanigans at the beginning, eventually started to look bored. He wasn’t rude or anything, but Maks couldn’t shake the feeling that he didn’t like Ewelina very much and was mostly irritated by her. That made Maks equally irritated, because he could already tell that Aleks and Ewelina in the same room didn’t make a good combination. That’s why he was glad when Ewelina announced that she was going to stay over at Marta’s (finally after all this time he learned the brunette’s name), cause she lived in the area, and that they were all leaving. Maks assured her that he was fine with that and that he was planning on staying with Aleks for a little bit longer and then taking an Uber home. He wasn’t exactly sure when he decided that he was going to stay with Aleks for a little bit longer and take an Uber home. It just came out.

There was one problem he failed to consider: that if he was going to be sitting and drinking for a few hours straight, he will eventually end up drunk. Some things were just too obvious to take them into account. So that happened and Maks started talking, and after he started he couldn’t stop, which was pretty bad under the circumstances. Aleks agreed.

“We can’t just… let it go,” Maks mumbled, leaning heavily on the table and boring into him. “We need to figure some kind of… some kind of plan, cause you… you were there, and I…”

“Could you please stop fucking announcing it?” Aleks hissed, staring at him coldly.

“No, I cannot,” Maks declared and hesitated, gulping loudly. “I just can’t… stop thinking about it…”

“You can’t stop thinking about it right now, because you’re hammered.” Aleks didn’t sound much more sober himself, but he was easily standing his ground. “There’s nothing to consider. Whatever crazy scenarios are running through your head right now, they’ve got nothing to do with what actually happened. It is not your business and it is not your problem,” he emphasized, lowering his voice, because the club was slowly becoming deserted and they didn’t have to shout to hear each other anymore. In this case, they actually shouldn’t.

“But it is my… because.” Maks lost his train of thought, but recovered quickly. “Because we’re in this together and I am kind of… involved, right?”

“Christ, you don’t even know what you are talking about.” Aleks rubbed his face, looking like he was slowly losing his patience. “You know nothing, Maks, so just stay the fuck out of it and stick to the version where we’ve met in Pavilions three weeks ago through mutual friends.”

Maks spend a long moment staring at him drunkenly.

“But we didn’t meet three weeks ago,” he corrected in all seriousness, like it was some grand discovery. “We’ve met yesterday. It was fucking yesterday, Aleks, and I don’t understand how can you possibly be so fucking calm when I feel like I’m fucking sweating bullets…”

“Jesus Christ,” Aleks muttered, starting to look almost worried about a mess of a man in front of him, his shifty eyes and forlorn expression. “Ok, that’s enough for you…”

“No, no, I have to…” Maks protested, trying to save the last drop of his drink that Aleks just stole from under his nose.

“No fucking way. Get up and get an Uber,” he ordered so firmly that Maks did as he was told without much fuss.

“Where are we?” he asked obliviously.

“Six slash eight, Mazowiecka.” Aleks grabbed his coat and Maks’s arm and pulled him towards the exit. “Come on.”

“But it won’t be here for another…”

“Doesn’t matter. You could use some fresh air.” Maks actually felt better when they left the stifling club. Aleks didn’t let him go when they got outside, but guided him on to the back alley. “Ok, now listen up.” He hissed menacingly. „I don’t know what kind of fucking fantasy world you enter when you’re wasted, but we’re not together in anything. What, you don’t have enough excitement in life and you think we’re fucking Bonnie and Clyde now because you let me sleep on your couch? Well, go find your excitement somewhere else, because we’re not fucking friends, no matter what bullshit we fed to your girlfriend. I don’t even know you, so I really can’t comprehend where you got the hilarious idea that I’m going to fucking discuss with you what I’m planning to do next. Who the fuck do you think you are?” he growled, taking a grip of his shirt and pressing him up against the wall. Maks didn’t think it was very nice of him, but he was way too drunk to feel hurt.

“I am someone who could have gone to the police and doesn’t understand why he didn’t yet.” His voice was much more controlled than he felt inside. Aleks laughed derisively.

“That would bring all of my fucking efforts to keep you alive to naught, so I would appreciate if you respect my sacrifice.” Maks flinched. “So now I’m going to tell you what we’re going to do. You’re going to keep your fucking lips sealed, and what I’m going to do is solely my concern.”

“So why did you text me?” Maks challenged, suddenly thinking much more clearly. “And why the fuck did you come here?”

The look on Aleks’s face was hard to read.

“The car is here,” he grunted finally. Maks yanked away from him and took off towards the car with the confidence of someone drunk out of their mind, staggering a little. He didn’t look back at Aleks until the backseat door was open.

“You’re coming with me, right?” He didn’t know where his hazy brain got that idea from. Aleks looked surprised, but just shrugged in reply.

“If you insist.” He stopped next to the other door. „It’s because I would rather keep an eye on you.”

Maks rolled his eyes.

“Yeah, right,” he snorted, not believing this excuse for a second. He didn’t want to keep an eye on him and he also didn’t consider befriending Maks or going home with him again to be particularly smart. He was just doing it because he liked him. Maks didn’t know what made him so sure of it or why it made him feel so elated. It was probably the booze.

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Am pretty sure that I agree with Aleks and that I do not like the fiancée or any of her girlfriends...  Totally confused, but that isn't always a bad thing.

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With the engagement lasting 18 months or so, plenty of time for the engagement to be called off, can't wait to see the reason!

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@drsawzall, exactly, nothing’s set in stone yet, everything can change. And probably will ;) 

@centexhairysub, good to know that confusion is good sometimes, I promise things will start clearing up soon. 

Thank you for your feedback! 

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Still can't guess what involvement Aleks had in the murder, unless maybe he was also an intended victim and managed to get away. But then, why would he be out in a club rather than hiding away?

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I'm finding myself getting drawn into this tale, so well done, @Mercury Eff

I have a suspicion that Aleks is probably not the bad boy that we are being led to believe he ise (or at least that Maks suspects him to be). I'm curious about the telephone call he made from Maks' apartment the first night, and thought we might find out more in this chapter as to what Aleks is actually involved in. I suppose I'll just have to read on, and hopefully things will become clearer in time.

[quote]It was obvious that Ewelina loved him.[/quote]

I'm assuming that was a thought inside Maks' head. Because I suspect the only thing Edwina really likes about him is the fact that his family obviously has money. I further suspect that the only person Ewelina loves is herself. We'll see if I am right on that (and very often I am wrong when reading characters early on in a story).

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7 hours ago, Marty said:

[quote]It was obvious that Ewelina loved him.[/quote]

I'm assuming that was a thought inside Maks' head. Because I suspect the only thing Edwina really likes about him is the fact that his family obviously has money. I further suspect that the only person Ewelina loves is herself. We'll see if I am right on that (and very often I am wrong when reading characters early on in a story).

I actually meant that Ewelina loved Aleks, not Maks (though she probably loves Maks too, in her own way), and loved in much more casual way - as further explained, she wanted Maks to find some friends on his own, so when she met Aleks, she loved him, cause Aleks is pretty fun and Maks was finally engaging in an interaction with someone. Still, it was a thought in Maks’s head and his suspision on what she was feeling. And now I’m panicking that it’s not clear enough, so I’m going to check that part.

Yeah, maybe you’re right about her, or partly right. I try not to write anyone either fully awful or fully awesome, so while she definitely has her flaws, she might not be that bad. 

Thank you @Marty for the comment and I’m very glad that you’re enjoying the story so far! 

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Interesting. Aleks's motivation remains a mystery although I have a pretty good guess as to what it might be. It's also funny that Maks can't figure out his motivation either... perhaps he isn't ready yet to admit it. 

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Thanks @Arch Hunter! Yes, Aleks’s motivation is not hard to guess, as for Maks... well, he’s not very bright when it comes to that and pretty good at danial. So it can take him a while. 

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