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A Russian Summer - 5. Chapter V

Alexei's parents meet the neighbours, with mixed reactions, and poor Alexei is a little lost. Russia at this time was a feudal society divided into the nobility and upper class, and the peasants. Educated people, those with money and an education spoke French, as well as their native tongue.

Princess Agnia Gabrelyanov called on my mother. I was not there at the time, but I know the meeting did not go well. My mother told my father that the princess was exasperating. She continuously spoke about herself, her family, and worse, she decried everyone else whose paths she had crossed as villainous scoundrels. It would be true to say she did not have a good word for anyone and was absolutely convinced of her own self-importance.

My mother found the princess to be vulgar and uneducated, an observation which did not surprise my father. He recalled the late Prince Gabrelyanov, Princess Agnia's husband. The Prince had been a frivolous and rather stupid person who had successfully gambled away the better part of the family's wealth. The man had lived a life of leisure, much of his time spent in France, where he had done nothing at all, until his financial situation forced him to return home.

In my father's opinion he had married unwisely, to the daughter of a merchant agent, the now Princess Agnia, whom he had no doubt chosen purely to fill his coffers. However, being the dull-wit he was, he had lost no time in speculating with his new found wealth and ending up practically penniless.

The Princess Agnia, my mother confirmed, when she was not making a bad commentary on others, had insisted that she should intervene on her behalf with the Sergayovs. She did not stop in her persistence.

"I only hope she does not ask to borrow money," my mother said.

"That," my father replied, "is not unlikely."

After a short moment, my father picked up the conversation again. "Does she speak French?" He asked.

"Badly," my mother told him.

"And her daughter? I understand she is a very intelligent and educated young lady."

"In which case she cannot take after her mother."

"Nor, indeed, her father," my father remarked.

My mother sighed and said no more. My father returned to his own thoughts. The whole conversation had made me feel uncomfortable.

After dinner I went wandering by our neighbours lodge though I had vowed to myself to stay away. I caught sight of the young Princess Anoushka who was accompanied by Konstantin. Seeing the handsome young hussar set my heart racing, more so when the couple turned in my direction, but at the same time I was struck with an air of panic.

Footsteps approaching from behind made me stop and turn.

"Is this the young princess?" My father asked as he joined me.

"Yes," I nodded.

As they drew nearer my father smiled and gave a little bow. "Nestor Mikhailov," he announced, and I noticed her smile as she regarded him.

My father was always well dressed and cut a fine figure for a man of his age.

"You have already made the acquaintance of my son, I believe," he nodded his head towards me.

"Yes, indeed," she replied, flashing a beautiful smile in my direction.

At this point Konstantin, my young hussar, as I now liked to think of him, stepped forward. "Konstantin Nikolayev, fifth regiment Alexandria Hussars." He greeted my father with a click of his heels and an equally delightful smile which matched that of the young princess.

My father stayed only a short while, making inconsequential polite chat, before excusing himself to return to our house. I, of course, accompanied him, berating myself for having been struck dumb and taking no part in the encounter.

I don't know how you find these short chapters, I feel that they move the story forward and pack in information quite concisely, but might be too brief for some readers.
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1 hour ago, Gary L said:

Going along v nicely.   Painting a long-gone Tolstoyen (?) world.  

Exactly that period, but I doubt my writing is even remotely comparable. He had thirteen children and one son was named Alexei! Thank you for commenting and reading the story. Next chapter follows very shortly, it's being reviewed by the site team.

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I kind of agree with your comment, James, that the chapters seem a bit too brief.  Yes, they do move  the story along, but it leaves me wanting more, sooner - lol

I am enjoying it though!

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@JohnnyCD thank you for commenting, I'm pleased you are enjoying the story, and the chapters are getting published daily... which pushes me to keep writing to keep ahead, the schedule, along with the readers comments and reactions.

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4 hours ago, Gandalf said:

Their shortness is alleviated by your regularity. Keep on trucking.  

The chapters are getting published online as regularly (everyday usually) as permitted and moderation reviews allow.

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Although the chapters are short, they do move the story forward quickly.

One item to note is the correct spelling of the Princess' surname. Historically and to this day, whether amongst aristocracy or non-royals, women's last names end with the special grammatical feature – gender.

In brief, this means, that you add a special letter to all feminine words. For most names, it is “a”. The same grammar rule was used in the Old Slavonic, the ancestor of Russian language.Therefore, all Russian female surnames ('family' name) end with the letter 'a'.

Accordingly, as Princess Agnia's late husband was Prince Gabrelyanov, she would be called Princess Gabrelyanova. 

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5 hours ago, Anton_Cloche said:

as Princess Agnia's late husband was Prince Gabrelyanov, she would be called Princess Gabrelyanova

You are absolutely right, Princess Agnia is so named to differentiate mother and daughter Princess Anoushka, maybe that is not quite right, but that's my reasoning behind using first names for the princesses.

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