rima fragmenta, Fragments of a Rift: Fifty Sonnets for Kevin - 1. the substance of sunlight

These beautiful scenes of hesitation and exploration seem bathed in a lovely kind of light. You make me feel present to a most marvelous connection. 

1 minute ago, Parker Owens said:

These beautiful scenes of hesitation and exploration seem bathed in a lovely kind of light. You make me feel present to a most marvelous connection. 

Thank you, Parker. It's very hard to judge one's own work when the theme is so close to memory and experience

1 hour ago, AC Benus said:

Thank you, Parker. It's very hard to judge one's own work when the theme is so close to memory and experience

Keep going. These truly are absolutely beautiful. ‘A flood of you will allow me to breathe.’  Jesus. 

Well, what about "Your kisses have the substance of sunlight". That is absolutely legit!!!!!!

22 hours ago, 84Mags said:

Keep going. These truly are absolutely beautiful. ‘A flood of you will allow me to breathe.’  Jesus. 

Thanks, @84Mags. Your encouragement is greatly appreciated

16 hours ago, Georgie DHainaut said:

Well, what about "Your kisses have the substance of sunlight". That is absolutely legit!!!!!!

Thank you, @Georgie DHainaut. Your kind support is much appreciated 

No, thank you!! First of all for these sonnets (and I hope to read the other 48 as well) and for motivating me to publish some of my poems as well, apart from my stories- 

1 hour ago, Georgie DHainaut said:

No, thank you!! First of all for these sonnets (and I hope to read the other 48 as well) and for motivating me to publish some of my poems as well, apart from my stories- 

That's good news. I wholeheartedly support poetry on GA