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    Aditus
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  • 12/10/2015
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2015 - Winter - Blackout Entry

Lights On! - 1. Lights On!

Lights On!

 

Black out – Lights on!

Seeing what is veiled

By the dark.

 

Black out – Spot on!

Aiming at what’s dimmed

By the dark.

 

Black out – Wake up!

Hearing what is hushed

By the dark.

 

Black out – Stand up!

Unmasking what’s cloaked

By the light.

Thank you, AC! :)
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Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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2015 - Winter - Blackout Entry
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Lisa

Loved it, Addy! :)

 

I read it a few times. Like Gary, I loved the reversal at the end with the light instead of the dark. :)

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Mikiesboy

Interesting ... power outages/blackouts affect us in interesting ways ... so much is missing, light sometimes, tv, your devices, the internet. ...oh what to do? But there is so much to see and discuss. You learn your brain doesn't need all the input because you can create! Nice poem, there is much to read ...and think about!

 

tim

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Aditus
On 12/11/2015 05:50 AM, AC Benus said:

It's an intriguing poem. Thanks for letting me be the first to see it.

Thank YOU, for your help and encouragement.

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On 12/11/2015 06:15 AM, dughlas said:

Hmmm, this leads my thoughts to so many places. Thanks for sharing it.

That's a good thing, I hope. Thank you, dughlas. :)

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On 12/11/2015 07:31 AM, Headstall said:

Great poem, Adi... loved the reversal at the end... cheers... Gary...

Thank you, Gary. I've been unsure to post it, but I think it's okay now. :)

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On 12/11/2015 03:13 PM, Lisa said:

Loved it, Addy! :)

 

I read it a few times. Like Gary, I loved the reversal at the end with the light instead of the dark. :)

Thank you, Lisa! :)

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On 12/14/2015 12:14 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Interesting ... power outages/blackouts affect us in interesting ways ... so much is missing, light sometimes, tv, your devices, the internet. ...oh what to do? But there is so much to see and discuss. You learn your brain doesn't need all the input because you can create! Nice poem, there is much to read ...and think about!

 

tim

I'm glad my poem inspired you! Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Tim. :)

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On 02/01/2016 06:29 AM, Suvitar said:

I rarely read poems, but I liked yours :*)

Thank you for taking a look then. :) I'm happy you liked it.

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