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Growing Wings And Other Things - 8. I promise, Do you?

:) :) :) :) Growing- becoming comfortable with trust.

I've been struggling to put my feelings down in words.
Nothing seems good enough .
Everyday I threw them away to the birds.

You don't have expensive taste
Yet you are so rich with words
Never a thought that you would waste
So would this even be enough?

Maybe a gift thats really small
I mean your just a gentle Angel after all
How would you like that?
Something to penetrate your mind
But wouldn't necessary waste your time
I bet you'd like it
If you haven't noticed that
I'm quite nervous I'm quite shy
But I believe that if I ever want to open up
Then your my guy
That's why it pains me so much
When you have to say goodbye
Maybe I've been listening too much love songs
Especially the one about the bicycles
But it keeps me dreaming
It keeps me hoping
That in your arms I'll be sleeping
So for now I have my thoughts
I have myself and I have your promise
That one day this will all come to life
All the hours and the nights
I spent dreaming of our lives
It wouldn't have been for nothing
So I say on this day
I will wait for you
Please my love promise me
That you will wait for me too
;)
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On 06/25/2014 07:47 AM, AC Benus said:
This is very tender, and i'd like to know what the 'bicycle' song is, lol
Thanks. Nine Million Bicycles is the song :)
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I don't know that song either, but the poem captures such incredible sweetness of a love that is impossible, remote, yet hopeful of fulfillment, somehow, maybe, one day. It brought a tear to my eye.

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On 09/24/2014 08:43 PM, Jaro_423 said:
I don't know that song either, but the poem captures such incredible sweetness of a love that is impossible, remote, yet hopeful of fulfillment, somehow, maybe, one day. It brought a tear to my eye.
it did? you lie! just kidding lol. thanks
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