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Children of the Dust - 7. The Wedding

“Stop fidgeting, Drew. I can’t finish your bowtie if you keep jerking around like you are.”

“Fuck you, Vince. I’m nervous, okay? How can you be so calm?”

“Mate, it’s only a wedding, not a coronation. All you have to do is walk down the aisle, and look pretty.”

“Fuck you, Vince. I’m not the actor slash fashion model here. You’re the one accustomed to parading in front of people. I’m usually the one behind the camera, remember?”

“It’s all your fault anyway. If you hadn’t sent that letter and those baseball cards back then, we’d never have ended in this position.”

“Fuck you, Vince. You liked that letter and those cards well enough. You carried them out of Vietnam, kept them with you during your years in Australia, and brought them with you to the United States when you came to meet your father.”

“True, but it was you, after we met, who insisted I move to Los Angeles. It was you who gave me a place to live, and introduced me around until I landed my first role in a movie. And it’s been you, through all these years, who’s kept me going with your steadfast support.”

“Yeah well, you were a mess; somebody had to keep an eye on you. You had your Australian parents, you’d just found your American father and his wife, and he had enough information about your birth mother, you knew you could track her down if you wanted to. Bringing you home with me to LA was the least I could do. You took the little push I gave you into the movies and ran with it. The rest’s all been your doing.”

“But you did all that based on nothing, mate. You had no idea who I was at the time. Yet you propped me up when I was close to being lost. And there are four sets of proud parents out there, looking forward to today’s ceremony, and the official joining of our families. Have I told you lately that I love you?”

“Yeah, yeah, yeah. Don’t go getting all mushy with me; you know I hate that shit. Anyway, go find your son, I’ll go get my daughter and let’s get this done. The sooner the two of them are married, the sooner you and I can get drunk.”

 

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Throughly enjoyed the pace and flow, each chapter was just enough and combined became incredibly leading, we knew where this was heading and then ... oh, Oh!
Beautifully conceived and executed.

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On 06/08/2015 06:59 AM, dughlas said:

Throughly enjoyed the pace and flow, each chapter was just enough and combined became incredibly leading, we knew where this was heading and then ... oh, Oh!

Beautifully conceived and executed.

Thanks dughlas!

 

I tried to lead the readers on a bit. Guess it worked! :D

 

Just like the baseball cards had a surprise ending I wanted the story to have one also. No sexual orientation discussed at all and sexual acts just referred to in passing. I was trying to prove I could write a decent story without loading it up with sex scenes. Those have a place of course, but I didn't think they belonged here.

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I'm still a little unclear as to who exactly the "four sets of parents" based on the storyline that has been presented. But, I'm working on it.
Also, nice updates. They flesh out the story and characters quite well

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On 06/09/2015 10:55 PM, Reader1810 said:

I'm still a little unclear as to who exactly the "four sets of parents" based on the storyline that has been presented. But, I'm working on it.

Also, nice updates. They flesh out the story and characters quite well

You can thank my editor for the improvements. Kitt made some suggestions which improved the story once I addressed her concerns.

 

1. Drew's parents

2. Vince's father & his wife

3. Vince's mother & her husband (visiting from Vietnam)

4. Vince's adoptive parents (visiting from Australia)

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