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The Stolen Dream

   (3 reviews)
Genres: Action/Adventure, Mystery, Thriller/Suspense, Science Fiction,
Sub-genres: Suspense, Adventure, Soft Sci-Fi, Light Mystery

Friggy and Jewl were street kids in a world that had been changed by momentous events. They survived by simply taking what they could get, working if work presented itself, and choosing other means if needed. If that sometimes meant a little basic thievery, well, that was a part of the world they lived in. It was a big city, and small crimes were tough to solve.

Until one day when they picked up something unexpected, something unique. And in so doing, set off a pursuit that would ultimately redefine their very existence.

A long short story, presented complete.

Copyright © 2020 Geron Kees; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (14 members)

  • Action-Packed 12
  • Great Pacing 9
  • Great Characters 14
  • Character Growth 0
  • Dialog / Banter 0
  • Plot Twists 0
  • Beautiful Writing 0
  • Immersive World 11
  • Satisfying Ending 0
  • Fresh / Original 8
  • Counldn't Put It Down 2
  • Suspenseful 4
  • Gave Me Chills 2
  • Funny 1
  • Feel-Good 2
  • Heartwarming 0
  • Emotional Impact 2
  • Thought-Provoking 0
  • Romantic Chemistry 0
  • Smoldering Chemistry 2
  • Like 5
  • Love 9
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  • 1. The Story
    • 17,523 Words
    • 3,601 Views
    • 27 Comments

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Frosty

Frosty 2,324

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

I loved this short little story, it was a rush from start to finish with lots of sweet tender moments scattered throughout. I love friggy and jewl, i know you don't normally dip into this genre but i have to say you knocked it outta the park. I would love to see more of them but you tied up all the loose ends nicely without leaving the readers pulling their hair out and grasping at straws wondering what happens next. A thrilling yet heart warming fantasy tale chalk full of warm fuzzies. 

Response from the author:

Thank you for the kind review. I actually meant for there to be a follow-up to this!

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ReaderPaul

ReaderPaul 21,727

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

This is such a good story that it could use a sequel.  However, such a sequel would be quite challenging to write.

This story is both simple and complex as it explores adventure, friendship, love, loyalty, and problem solving -- most of those elements working together at the same time.  Another theme might be necessity versus sheer greed.

Well worth reading, with one warning -- do not read unless you have at least a little imagination.  It's that good.

Response from the author:

This story was originally intended to be one of two. The rest of the idea is still floating around inside my head, somewhere. Getting it out may still be possible...

Thanks for the push!

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