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Opposites attract - 23. Chapter 23

Epilogue

After the wedding we had stayed two days with my parents. Hans and Emily had joined us. To be frank, my Mom hadn’t left them much of a choice. We had promised to visit both of them after our honey moon trip to finally talk.

Kev and I returned to the college, before leaving for our honey moon. It had been more convenient to book flights that started and ended close to the college. We had just ascended the stairs and were walking down the floor to our room. Administration had already changed the name plate.

“Leon Fitzgerald. Kevin Fitzgerald.”

I touched the plate.

“One and a half year ago, I’d been anxious when reading your name here.”

I turned to Kev.

“Now it is the most wonderful thing to see.”

He closed the distance between us and raised me until we were on eye level. Our kiss was tender and full of love for each other.

“It is time to carry my husband over the threshold.”

Of course, Kev was smiling. His handsome features would have been incomplete without it. He opened the door and carried me into the room where everything had begun.

Copyright © 2011 Hasimir Fenrig; All Rights Reserved.
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ANORDOFHALL

WOW... I love this story, I found it in Nifty in one long chapter that i read without stoping, and is one of my favorites : ) Do you think that, maybe, this story can go on? , maybe adonpting a baby? : ) ....I'm a big fan.... i'm reading DUMB now... please don create any problem por Marcel and Tim(pleaaaase)... can't wait for the next chapter: )

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Hasimir Fenrig
On 09/17/2011 04:51 PM, ANORDOFHALL said:
WOW... I love this story, I found it in Nifty in one long chapter that i read without stoping, and is one of my favorites : ) Do you think that, maybe, this story can go on? , maybe adonpting a baby? : ) ....I'm a big fan.... i'm reading DUMB now... please don create any problem por Marcel and Tim(pleaaaase)... can't wait for the next chapter: )
Thanks a lot for this kind review! There are some vague plans for a sequel to 'Opposites attract'. But there are some other story ideas which I'd like to explore, too. And first of all I want to finish 'Dumb'. We'll see what fate has up its sleeves for Marcel and Tim... ;-)
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MuddyRiverGirl

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! :o That was such an awesome story, not that your other stories aren't, because I love all of them! ;) I have finished reading "Dumb" and I am currently waiting for story updates on "The Ardor!" Your stories are always very well written and I always look forward to how nicely your stories flow, and the outcomes are always amazing. My favorites of yours is your story "The Ardor," but I really, really love your other stories, including this one! :) I just finished and all I can say is that I am impressed and you have quickly become placed on my list of favorite authors here on GA! Thanks for writing such great stories, I look forward to reading more of them! :D

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Hasimir Fenrig
On 03/03/2012 08:24 AM, MuddyRiverGirl said:
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! :o That was such an awesome story, not that your other stories aren't, because I love all of them! ;) I have finished reading "Dumb" and I am currently waiting for story updates on "The Ardor!" Your stories are always very well written and I always look forward to how nicely your stories flow, and the outcomes are always amazing. My favorites of yours is your story "The Ardor," but I really, really love your other stories, including this one! :) I just finished and all I can say is that I am impressed and you have quickly become placed on my list of favorite authors here on GA! Thanks for writing such great stories, I look forward to reading more of them! :D
It makes me really happy to know that you like my stories that much. It's a nice incentive and motivation to go on writing. Thanks a lot for your praise and feedback!
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Terry P

I absolutely loved this story. Thank you. I'm enjoying reading the Ardour as well, and look forward to reading more of your work. You are an amazing author.

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Hasimir Fenrig
On 03/26/2012 03:25 AM, Terry P said:
I absolutely loved this story. Thank you. I'm enjoying reading the Ardour as well, and look forward to reading more of your work. You are an amazing author.
Thank you so much. It really means a lot to me that people enjoy my stories. 'Opposites attract' being my first will always be something special for me. So I'm more than glad that you liked it.
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Enpassant

This was one of the best stories I've read here in a long time! The end actually made me shed some tears of happiness. Awesome work!

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Hasimir Fenrig
On 12/31/2012 08:30 AM, Enpassant said:
This was one of the best stories I've read here in a long time! The end actually made me shed some tears of happiness. Awesome work!
Thanks a lot for your kind feedback. I didn't write much lately, but I'm determined to do so again soon. Thanks again for the encouragement.
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Headstall

What a sweet story...filled with love and support for each other...it worked on all levels. Keep writing...your understanding of romance is truly wonderful...cheers...Gary

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Hasimir Fenrig
On 07/04/2014 06:08 AM, Headstall said:
What a sweet story...filled with love and support for each other...it worked on all levels. Keep writing...your understanding of romance is truly wonderful...cheers...Gary
Thank you very much.

I'm into romance and sweetness, so I'm glad it worked for you too.

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Karl Five

Very well done! Although some of the plot was predictable, there were also a lot of unexpected happenings along the way.
I happen to like the sort of story that has two very different people, sometimes even to the point of them being enemies, who find themselves in a situation where they have to learn to like, trust, care for, or even love each other. (In many ways, that describes one of my own ebook series, so I obviously enjoy that theme.)
After reading Mario’s writings here and also his published ebook, “Perception: a German Love Story”, I must conclude that he’s a big fan of that sort of plot, since that's the theme of most of his stories. If you liked “Opposites Attract”, you’ll also like “Perception”, since it’s along the same lines, except that the two protagonists are in high school, not college. Despite the title, it’s in English, so don’t let that keep you from reading it.

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On 06/12/2016 01:59 PM, FlowersBite said:

Beautiful story!

I'm glad you liked the story :) It was interesting for me to follow your impressions while reading by the reviews you posted. Thank you!

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