Kenny and Peter - Book 1 - 17. eFiction Reviews

Title: Chapter 07 Reviewer: jhol7689

soooo I hope Brian gets together with peter? That was a cute comment "I hope he's gay!" Lolz i shall have to read on=]
Date: 02/17/2010 10:12 PM

Title: Chapter 16 Reviewer: David McLeod

HH5, Book 2 will come when it does, when you and your muse are ready. In the meanwhile, focus on what's important to you: family, health, job. And don't worry, we'll all still be here.

David
Date: 04/11/2009 08:19 AM

Title: Chapter 09 Reviewer: Timmy
You better not tell us Mr. Morrison is molesting Peter, or worse in the next chapters!! :-(

Either way, it 'sounds' like he's abusing him in some way or form. :(

Author's Response:

We know that Peter has suffer a physical abuse. Through a "Hail Mary" stroke of luck, he found Kenny. Still, short of locking him up, there is nothing to prevent future abuse. Peter has yet to deal with the scars that life had dealt him. How will he do that, now, and in the future? How will Peter's life be different than it would have been had he not escaped? These are some of the issues the story will explore.
Date: 01/28/2009 05:20 PM

Title: Chapter 06 Reviewer: Shadowm572

a very good story and things are progressing quite nicely.

Jon

Author's Response:

I always believe that a story starts with an idea but how it ends is the adventure that the author and his characters partake in.

Thank you for your review
Date: 12/31/2008 06:04 PM

Title: Chapter 05 Reviewer: Pete

HH5, I found this story quite by accicent and I'm hooked on it. I like the way you have the characters tell the story from their point of view, always in the first person. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next with Kenny and Peter.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your thoughts. I think its easier to write this way so I can avoid the complexities of grammar.
Date: 12/29/2008 10:20 PM

Title: Chapter 05 Reviewer: Shadowm572

definitely off to a good start, it'll be interesting to see what happens in later chapters.

Can't wait to see more

Jon

Author's Response:

Yes, Thank you - I have the same reaction too.
Date: 12/23/2008 02:33 AM
Title: Chapter 01 Reviewer: davey chase

Good start. It was emotional and very interesting.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. The short stories are just as emotional too.
Date: 12/16/2008 02:07 PM

Title: Chapter 01 Reviewer: David McLeod

You have an uncanny ability to turn your own live's drama, as you put it in the introductory notes, into ideas that evoke strong emotions. There are some wonderful turns of phrase, and it appears that Kenny and Peter will become flesh and blood characters quickly.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.
Date: 12/11/2008 10:12 AM