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Mark's journal entry, April 27

   (5 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction,
Sub-genres: Drama

2006 Anthology

Copyright © 2010 JulienGregg; All Rights Reserved.

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Carlos Hazday

Carlos Hazday 116,720

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Short and concise short story tinged with sadness and resolve. The concept is clever but the writing leaves something to desire. Instead of a current journal entry, it reads like someone remembering a long ago event. I think using a simple past tense would have improved the immediacy of the story.

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Brayon

Brayon 41,659

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

More of a narrative posting, and less a short story or even a Journal Entry. It's told from the 1st person PoV, in several paragraphs of narrative. Not really a Journal Entry, or even a short story. More of an Emotive Narrative posting.

 

Overall, was well written and had a good message. 

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