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All In The Edit

   (4 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction,
Sub-genres: Drama

Mark is a wedding videographer, expert at making every couples happy day look wonderful. But he's not yet ready to admit his own relationship is falling apart.

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  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 1
  • Characters 1
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 2
  • Compelling 1
  • Feel-Good 1
  • Humor 1
  • Smoldering 1
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 1
  • World Building 1
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pvtguy

pvtguy 20,730

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

A realistic look at a day in the life of someone who allowed his partner to be the control factor - thus, an unequal relationship to begin with.  In the end, he does stand up for himself.  I like the analogy of editing a film to editing life.  Perhaps the roughness of the story is in itself another analogy...

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Mikiesboy

Mikiesboy 152,142

   4 of 5 members found this review helpful 4 / 5 members

An interesting piece.

Written in first person. I felt the characters were a bit under developed and didn't feel particularly sympathetic to either of them. It was also a little rough as it could do with an editor. However, it wouldn't need much.

I like the realism here, and I understand that happily ever after just isn't realistic in every story. Thanks for posting this brave piece. 

Response from the author:

Thanks for your useful comments. I don’t usually write in first person or present tense, so the whole thing was an experiment. 

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