Spice Rack - 2. Flirtation

Thank you, Val. Flirting often leaves the whole spirit in a tremble, doesn't it? 

Flammable cravings... Oh, so combustible. Simple words with purposeful impact.

Wildfires can be born of such things, they are that hot. Thanks for reading.

powerful -  linger -- love the single word in the centre which seems to hold the two extremes at both ends together.

Thanks for this

I used to know these night thoughts very intimately. You bring back a certain feeling within me, and that proves your mastery. 

1 hour ago, mayday said:

powerful -  linger -- love the single word in the centre which seems to hold the two extremes at both ends together.

Thanks for this

Thank you so much for saying that. I, um, took a long time over that word choice. I really appreciate your taking the time to consider this poem.

5 minutes ago, AC Benus said:

I used to know these night thoughts very intimately. You bring back a certain feeling within me, and that proves your mastery. 

I blush at your kind words. These feelings have echoed in my brain for a long time, too. I am glad this poem struck a chord with you, however distant.

linger and craving - that point in a cinquain where it comes to rest is so important, and those two words are wonderful. Such thoughts and desires ... 

43 minutes ago, northie said:

linger and craving - that point in a cinquain where it comes to rest is so important, and those two words are wonderful. Such thoughts and desires ... 

Thanks so much for reading this. Yes, this poem is a bit tangy on the tongue, isn't it? And the words you noted do seem to drive everything else. 

Simple, striking words. I can feel the undercurrent thrill. 

Yeah; that feeling of excitement that plays on every nerve...did I get it right?

That igniting of a spark... the playfulness wrapped in uncertainty and hope... beautifully expressed. Another gem, warm to the touch, Parker... cheers... Gary....

1 hour ago, Headstall said:

That igniting of a spark... the playfulness wrapped in uncertainty and hope... beautifully expressed. Another gem, warm to the touch, Parker... cheers... Gary....

Warm to the touch...yes, exactly. In flirting, every move, every gesture feels that way. I hoped to convey the excitement and flush when one realizes what game is being played. Thanks for reading and responding to this!

I think I'll go with'Rave'.   I'm really enjoying this collection, Parker  

Thanks for the 'rave.' Wish we had that as an end-of-chapter option along with 'like.'