Spice Rack - 1. Selection

nice and spicy

4 minutes ago, Valkyrie said:

Very nice, Parker.  

Something good for the heat, then?

Just now, Mikiesboy said:

nice and spicy

Maybe something like you'd cook up?

Just now, Parker Owens said:

 

Maybe something like you'd cook up?

Parker!  is that an offer??  i love to cook with you.

Anytime you want to bake or cook, say the word...

This is certainly spicy, my friend. Love the line: "unhinge me, unsense me". In other words, be taken until you can't see or think straight anymore. The entire piece is invigorating. 

12 minutes ago, MacGreg said:

This is certainly spicy, my friend. Love the line: "unhinge me, unsense me". In other words, be taken until you can't see or think straight anymore. The entire piece is invigorating. 

You have it exactly right. And yes, it is um, zesty, isn't it?

Ahh, Parker. Nice.  Very, very nice! 

oh the dishes you're going make with this spice rack. keep on cooking

Let the desires be free! Enjoy a SPICY life! 

33 minutes ago, Defiance19 said:

Ahh, Parker. Nice.  Very, very nice! 

Something nice for a warm summer day?

17 minutes ago, mogwhy said:

oh the dishes you're going make with this spice rack. keep on cooking

It's meant to be a short series, but flavorful. 

13 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

Let the desires be free! Enjoy a SPICY life! 

Sounds like you enjoyed this one. There will be more. Thank you!

This poem has real motion to it, like the swirling dancers I guess. They become the perfect metaphor for the sensations within the poet's head. 

yet you were the greater fool to choose me. Err ... Not that I'm taking sides or anything.

Wonderful, sensual writing. So much description, imagery packed into so few words. It's what I like about cinquains.

1 hour ago, AC Benus said:

This poem has real motion to it, like the swirling dancers I guess. They become the perfect metaphor for the sensations within the poet's head. 

Dancing, falling, passion - yes, lots of motion. And you are right that this was meant to make a hundred quick images flash through the mind. Thank you.

1 hour ago, northie said:

 

yet you were the greater fool to choose me. Err ... Not that I'm taking sides or anything.

 

Wonderful, sensual writing. So much description, imagery packed into so few words. It's what I like about cinquains.

Cinquains, like Haiku, require economy. That's the fun part. The frustration is not being able to use a favorite word in the spot you want. I'm this one worked out. 

Okay, first, that was smoking hot  

And this...

You called

me crazy to

fall into your embrace;

yet you were the greater fool to

choose me.

For me, this is the essence of love, whether for a lifetime or other. When both partners feel they are the lucky one... 

Wonderful, Parker... exquisite... cheers... Gary....

This center portion was not the sizzle, but the real main course, exactly as you say. Thanks for reading this! 

Definitely spicy    Very nice, Parker 

An ode to the steamier side of things... I like it! 

Getting unhinged is very nice. 

On 6/19/2017 at 7:50 PM, LitLover said:

Definitely spicy    Very nice, Parker 

Not like plain mashed potatoes, no. Thanks for reading!

5 minutes ago, Puppilull said:

An ode to the steamier side of things... I like it! 

 

Getting unhinged is very nice. 

So glad you liked it! All those good 'un' words were fun to use. Thank you for reading!