The Case of Cloud Rider

This is a story about two brothers who tried tried to solve a mystery when they were teens, but were unsuccessful.  Years later, the younger brother, who had never given up on the case, discovers some new clues and presents what he learned to his older brother.  Together, they now attempt to bring this investigation to a conclusion.    

In my humble opinion, this story definitely needs another chapter or two to wrap things up and I'm looking forward to reading them at a later date.  

A great start that leaves you wanting more, much more.  It's an intriguing mystery that involves two estranged brothers.  The writing style is excellent and flows smoothly.  Excellent entry to the SA Anthology.

An awesome tale.

The great mystery of Cloud Rider that two brothers tried to solve as teenagers, that ended in tragedy. One brother becomes successful, the other brother falls apart.

But unknown to the successful brother, the other brother has never stopped trying to solve the mystery of Cloud Rider.

We witness regret, emotion and reconciliation between the brothers as they become a step closer to solving the mystery.

A great ending from Secret Author that leaves us wanting much more.

A really good short story about two brothers reconnecting after years apart. It's one that leaves you wanting more. I hope we get a follow-up in the future.

If you enjoy mysteries definitely give this a go. Then start pestering the author for more. 

It's a great start to an excellent story. So grab your funky Sherlock Holmes cape and hat, magnifying glass and fingerprint kit and hunker down to start figuring out the clues!

So much emotionally gripping writing in such a short piece is a sign of a high quality author.   This ticks all the boxes for a great read and leaves you desperate for more,  easily 5*****

A worthy mystery. Well written and compelling. It's great on its own, but it's certainly moreish.  Another reviewer said we should pester the author for more.
 

So, here i am, pestering!