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Please Don't


JamesSavik

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Please Don't

 

Please don’t look at the bruise on my face,

Please don’t ever drop by my place,

Please don’t ask me how I am,

Please don’t ask unless you give a damn.

 

Please let it go when I say that I’m fine,

Please ignore it when you see the signs,

I don’t know why they get so mad,

I wonder what happened to my Dad.

 

Please don’t say I just have to be strong,

Please don’t see what is really wrong,

I can take it, I don’t talk back or fight,

I can take it, it’ll be all right.

 

Please don’t notice, please don’t call,

When you hear a brawl through the wall,

I can take it, I don’t talk back or fight,

I can take it, it’ll be all right.

 

Please don’t notice all the fights,

Please give him time, he’s always contrite,

I can take it, I don’t talk back or fight,

I can take it, it’ll be all right.

 

Please don’t notice all the cops and the lights,

I couldn’t take it one more night,

Not one more blow or another fight.

They sigh; zip me up the body bag,

And they wonder why it had to be,

What you didn’t see was the death of me.

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Powerfully moving. I can't bring myself to like it because I have seen too many in that situation, but I appreciate the feeling behind it and how well you presented it.

 

I have never understood how people can accept and even defend abuse in a relationship. We should all do what we can to stop it - everywhere we see it.

 

Well done James.

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A dear friend of mine in high school was beaten regularly by her dad.  She lived with me and my parents a little bit before she moved in permanently with another good friend of hers.  My parents didn't hesitate to take her in when I told them what was going on.  Very well done, James. 

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