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Matteo Went Ahead
by Aditus

Reviewer: chris191070
Status: Complete
Word Count: 1,096

This short semi autobiographic story featured in the In To Deep Anthology 2024.

This is a very short tale where we find the author drawing on true life experiences.

I'd suggest having tissues available, as this story whilst only 1000 words really packs a punch.

We discover what it's like to lose a parent, which will have many of us thinking about what the future may hold.

A really emotional story, that is beautifully written.

Category: Anthology 2024  Genres:  General Fiction, Literary Fiction  Sub-genres: Drama, Slice of Life  Tags: mature, adult, senior, gay, europe, serious, death  Rating: Everyone

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Gary L

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This is a very strong piece of writing that hit me like a hammerblow. @Aditus takes us to a tough moment where life prepares to give way to death. It was a challenge to read but so worth it.   

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Valkyrie

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This is a very good story by Aditus.  It's clear that this is a personal piece, since the emotions come through quite strongly.  Definitely have tissues ready.  

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drsawzall

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Sometimes the power of a story are in the words unsaid, leaving the reader to fill in the blanks. A simply powerful story in a brilliantly compacted form.

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Cane23

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Amazing story that touched me deeply and reminded me of my own father passing! 

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BendtedWreath

BendtedWreath 2,024

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A deep love that transcends a lifetime. 😭

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Aditus

Aditus 28,727

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@chris191070, thank you for the review, I'm a little late because acold knocked me out flat.

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Aditus

Aditus 28,727

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And thank you all for the great comments. ❤️

I'm going back to bed.

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Thirdly

Thirdly 11,627

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5 hours ago, Aditus said:

@chris191070, thank you for the review, I'm a little late because acold knocked me out flat.

Hope you feel better soon, Adi.

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chris191070

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5 hours ago, Aditus said:

@chris191070, thank you for the review, I'm a little late because acold knocked me out flat.

Hope you feel better soon x

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