ethan thorn Posted October 15, 2004 Posted October 15, 2004 please post all feed back here after all feed back is a authors life blood right.
Sparhawk Posted October 15, 2004 Posted October 15, 2004 Ok Ethan, I will check them out and let you know what i think. Now, there is nothing wrong with this reply thread being posted here in the cafe. However, the chapters themselves should have been posted in the library. Now I need to go check them out and I will let you know what I think
ethan thorn Posted October 15, 2004 Author Posted October 15, 2004 myr told me to post the chapters here.
Sparhawk Posted October 15, 2004 Posted October 15, 2004 He is the boss, kiddo. I guess I just miss understood. I should have sent a pm instead of posting like this anyway. Hugs Mike
ethan thorn Posted October 28, 2004 Author Posted October 28, 2004 i will post the rest of the chapters when i get time so far time has not been my friend.
ethan thorn Posted October 31, 2004 Author Posted October 31, 2004 Chapters 4 and 5 are now up hope you like them.
ethan thorn Posted November 7, 2004 Author Posted November 7, 2004 Chapter 5 has been edited by someone that did so with out asking and i thank him for doing so. Let me know how it reads. As for chapter 6 i will start work in 6 days or less since my sister is going back to work and my mom cant stay by her self yet so i will be home 3or4 days a week working on chapter 6 hope your all ready for a ride.
ethan thorn Posted December 16, 2004 Author Posted December 16, 2004 Well chapter 6 is now posted hope you like it.
ethan thorn Posted February 2, 2005 Author Posted February 2, 2005 (edited) Ok i'm going to say this only once i wlll write chapter 7 if anyone wants to read it let me know here if not it will be by email only since if i ever hope to get better people need to let me know that want more. Because the only way a writer gets better is if he is writeing more and more practice makes perfect. Edited February 2, 2005 by ethan thorn
ethan thorn Posted February 3, 2005 Author Posted February 3, 2005 Ethan, Where do I find your story? <{POST_SNAPBACK}> You can find it here. https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/index.php?showtopic=1212 https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/index.php?showtopic=1383
Site Administrator Myr Posted February 5, 2005 Site Administrator Posted February 5, 2005 Chapters are now in The Library.
The Story Lover Posted February 6, 2005 Posted February 6, 2005 Chapters are now in The Library. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Myr, Thanks I appreciate that you are tireless worker. TSL
ethan thorn Posted February 7, 2005 Author Posted February 7, 2005 Thanks Myr. I have made some small edits to chapters 5 and 6 after i re read them again i may make some more edits. Thanks to thoes of you that have put up with my editing and my stroy and do hope you have enjoyed it and will for the new chapters to come.
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