War of the realms feed back here.

[ethan thorn]

please post all feed back here after all feed back is a authors life blood right.

[Sparhawk]

Ok Ethan, I will check them out and let you know what i think.

 

Now, there is nothing wrong with this reply thread being posted here in the cafe. However, the chapters themselves should have been posted in the library.

 

Now I need to go check them out and I will let you know what I think

[ethan thorn]

myr told me to post the chapters here.

[Sparhawk]

He is the boss, kiddo. I guess I just miss understood. I should have sent a pm instead of posting like this anyway.

 

Hugs

 

Mike

[ethan thorn]

i will post the rest of the chapters when i get time so far time has not been my friend.

[ethan thorn]

Chapters 4 and 5 are now up hope you like them.

[ethan thorn]

Chapter 5 has been edited by someone that did so with out asking and i thank him for doing so. Let me know how it reads. As for chapter 6 i will start work in 6 days or less since my sister is going back to work and my mom cant stay by her self yet so i will be home 3or4 days a week working on chapter 6 hope your all ready for a ride.

[ethan thorn]

Well chapter 6 is now posted hope you like it.

[ethan thorn]

Ok i'm going to say this only once i wlll write chapter 7 if anyone wants to read it let me know here if not it will be by email only since if i ever hope to get better people need to let me know that want more. Because the only way a writer gets better is if he is writeing more and more practice makes perfect.

Edited February 2, 2005 by ethan thorn

[Crackerwriter]

 

Jay smax Spawk's wrist

 

[The Story Lover]

Ethan,

 

Where do I find your story?

[ethan thorn]

Ethan,

 

Where do I find your story?

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You can find it here.

 

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/index.php?showtopic=1212

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/index.php?showtopic=1383

[Myr]

Chapters are now in The Library.

[The Story Lover]

Chapters are now in The Library.

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Myr,

 

Thanks I appreciate that you are tireless worker.

 

TSL

[ethan thorn]

Thanks Myr.

 

I have made some small edits to chapters 5 and 6 after i re read them again i may make some more edits.

 

Thanks to thoes of you that have put up with my editing and my stroy and do hope you have enjoyed it and will for the new chapters to come.