The New Age: By Adrian Michaels

[Adrian Michaels]

Hey Everyone,

 

This is for discussing my new story. Please let me know what you like, what you don't, and other stuff you think I should know!!

 

-AM

[Graeme]

And the link: The New Age

 

I'm not a great fan of superhero stories, but the idea for this story should interest those who are. It remains to be seen how the narrator learns to control his powers, and what he can do with them.

[Adrian Michaels]

Aw, thanks for putting the link up!! And thanks for the comments!

[Conner]

I, on the other hand, am a huge fan of superheroes. I also love fantasy....especially where the story has an evil stepmother in it.

 

Good start, Adrian.

 

Conner

[Ieshwar]

Well, another fantasy story? I like it...a lot! We don't have much superhero story here. This was good. Made me think of the anime "The Incredibles". Perhaps, that's coz that is my image of superheroes!

 

The start was promising and I'm sure that the future chapters would be as good.

 

Take care,

Ieshwar

[Adrian Michaels]

Hey guys, thanks for the comments!

 

And I LOVE the Incredibles!!

 

The wicked step-mother was something I've wanted to put in a story for a really long time. Just WAIT until later. You're gonna hate her!!