Hurt has told him not to listen

[corvus]

Hurt has told him not to listen,

And he has not listened

[Krista]

Hey,

 

 

I happened onto this poem while viewing the "Portal" thing GA has. I'm not one for reading poetry, but after reading it I liked it and I'm learning to comment on what I read now.. lol.

 

It was wrote in an interesting style, and the imagery it created was clear to me.

 

 

Good job

 

 

Krista

[AFriendlyFace]

That was a moving piece. I'm reminded of the expression, "The greatest pain is to feel nothing at all" which seems to be what the poem concludes as it says that the hurt has left him but the unhappiness has not. Perhaps without the hurt one cannot hope for the happiness?

 

Good job, Corvus!

 

-Kevin