Site Administrator Graeme Posted March 10, 2009 Site Administrator Posted March 10, 2009 Naked in the Rain by JFalkon A missing cat and being locked out of the house while naked. Also known as "How to meet the neighbor." :nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:
Site Administrator Graeme Posted March 14, 2009 Author Site Administrator Posted March 14, 2009 (edited) I'm very impressed by how quickly JFalkon is developing as an author. A weakness in their early stories was the dialogue, but that felt very natural in this story. I could feel the embarrassment as narrator asked his neighbor if he could borrow the ladder. I hope Mr. Jingles has a special pride of place in any future wedding as he is a very clever match maker Well done, JFalkon! A great little story. Edited March 15, 2009 by Graeme
Prince Duchess Posted March 14, 2009 Posted March 14, 2009 Aww...this is like a light gay fairy tale I love it
AFriendlyFace Posted March 15, 2009 Posted March 15, 2009 As always, I thoroughly enjoyed your story, JFalkon! It was beautiful written, and so sweet and moving! It was also all around delightful and fun to read. I laughed out loud in several places and smiled throughout most of it. Thanks so much for sharing it with us -Kevin P.S. Hot Redheads
Dolores Esteban Posted March 15, 2009 Posted March 15, 2009 I agree. A very sweet and romantic story. I saw the end coming. But I very much enjoyed reading your story.
Linxe Termoil Posted March 16, 2009 Posted March 16, 2009 Aww. I hope my kitty got my other kitty pregnant. Need some rain too, glad spring is coming upon us. Wonderful story with a great ending Jon
jfalkon Posted March 16, 2009 Posted March 16, 2009 Thanks guys! I had a lot of fun writing it. P.S. Hot Redheads Funny you should mention that. I was working with one at the time. He has since colored his hair back to its natural brown but he still looks great.
old bob Posted March 21, 2009 Posted March 21, 2009 I'm very impressed by how quickly JFalkon is developing as an author. ......Well done, JFalkon! A great little story. I have nothing to add to Graeme's post. I agree 100 % with him . Really a very sweet and romantic story. Waiting impatiently JFalkon's next stories, which surely will come soon. Dont let us wait too long .
jfalkon Posted March 23, 2009 Posted March 23, 2009 Thanks, Old Bob! I try to write a story every few months. Usualy for the anthologies.
Camy Posted March 25, 2009 Posted March 25, 2009 That's a really lovely story, and well written, too. Thanks for sharing. Camy
Sir Galahad Posted April 2, 2009 Posted April 2, 2009 Loved this story, cracked up when he realised he'd be mooning the neighborhood. Well done.
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