Marco Polo Posted September 7, 2009 Author Share Posted September 7, 2009 Thanks Chase, And others for reviewing. Chapter 8's up for reading. Enjoy and Tell me about, or don't Thanks guys, and Neph for continuing to put up with my 'it's' and 'its' problem. I laughed hardcore when you found one in Chapter 8. Link to comment
Conner Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 Eli's great! It's so much fun watching him stumble through all of this. Favourite line is from Hamon, "I'm so screwed..." Must be a prohibition against imbuing angelic powers into a human. Definitely looking forward to some dialogue between Hamon and his hardass boss (ex-boss?, Michael). So, tell me, Marco, which feather do we have to use for Eli and Alex to get it on? Keep writing! Link to comment
Phoenix Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 A very well written story, full of suspense. Thank you. Link to comment
Marco Polo Posted September 11, 2009 Author Share Posted September 11, 2009 And we are up to Chapter 9 So Check it out and let me know what you think.I'm pretty proud of myself. Not only have I enjoyed writing this, I also have never gotten up to double digit chapters. :) :) Link to comment
Conner Posted September 12, 2009 Share Posted September 12, 2009 Scary place that. Lots of wierd images. So Hamon is Gabriel. :wacko: Obviously, he didn't get the promotion he was looking for. Watch out for Lady...in the kimona. She's nasty. Alex doesn't look so good right about now. Link to comment
Marco Polo Posted September 17, 2009 Author Share Posted September 17, 2009 Thanks Conner, alright Chapter Ten is posted in eFiction. Hope everyone reads and enjoys. I have some particularly favourite scenes in this but I'll let you guys figure it out. Much love for my readers. Chapter 10 Link to comment
Conner Posted September 23, 2009 Share Posted September 23, 2009 Even though we got a glimpse of the bigger picture in that chapter, in terms of understanding what's going on in this story, well, let's just say I'm hanging on by my fingernails. So many questions. :wacko: I'm glad Alex is alive again...even though Michael thought he might be better off dead. So what's this nonsense about Alex and Eli waiting until this is all over and then seeing where they can go...relationship wise. I want romance! :2hands: I must admit that this has got to be pretty heady stuff for Eli. His closing statement didn't sound promising. Btw, do any of the angels get it on in this story??? Link to comment
Marco Polo Posted September 23, 2009 Author Share Posted September 23, 2009 Well I hope your pleasantly surprised Conner, as for the angels getting it on? I haven't decided as of yet though the idea is, atleast in my mind, amusing. I'm not sure why. Anyway. Chapter 11 Is up in eFiction for my your perusal. Enjoy!! Link to comment
Conner Posted September 24, 2009 Share Posted September 24, 2009 Yes, you pulled that off nicely, Marco! Mind you, that was a lot of work for a kiss. With the angels....amusing...I get that....it's all those feathers. Great chapter! Link to comment
Marco Polo Posted October 12, 2009 Author Share Posted October 12, 2009 Whoo, back. Been relatively blocked in all creative fronts. But I have finally been able to work some more out of me. So Chapter 12 is up. Visit and Enjoy Much love to all readers and all that. :P Link to comment
Conner Posted October 13, 2009 Share Posted October 13, 2009 Sweet scene there at the beginning with Eli and Alex. So Hamon wants to be God! No ego problem there. Wasn't it nice that Hamon apologized to Alex for stabbing him in the chest. Alex has become my favourite character. He's a sweetheart! Great chapter, Marco! Link to comment
Former Member Posted November 4, 2009 Share Posted November 4, 2009 Hey everyone. I was considering giving the rest of the story a chance to become what it should have been and try to write it. I was thinking I might try the next chapter or two with my own hand and show you guys. I dunno I guess I would like for something of his to be finished. Let me know what you think. Link to comment
Nephylim Posted November 4, 2009 Share Posted November 4, 2009 I think that it would be fantastic, awesome, special... I think you should go for it Link to comment
Zeoanne Posted November 4, 2009 Share Posted November 4, 2009 Hey everyone. I was considering giving the rest of the story a chance to become what it should have been and try to write it. I was thinking I might try the next chapter or two with my own hand and show you guys. I dunno I guess I would like for something of his to be finished. Let me know what you think. I feel like you read my mind... I believe it was a couple of weeks ago I was telling Nephy that someone should finish his story. I think it would be great if you went ahead and finished it. I believe Nephy has an idea where he was going with the story since they kept in contact with editing and such... I'm looking forward to YOUR writing, It would be interesting... Link to comment
Former Member Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 Hey guys. And Lo-Behold. Chapter 13. With it being sent by lovely Nephylim has been posted. I'll link, Chapter 13. I just want to say thanks to everyone who's been supportive of my continuation of this story. Hopefully more to come very soon, as I'm not so much of a writer it's slow goings. But luckily he left some notes behind in a very nice outline, can you say helpful. Link to comment
Nephylim Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 If anyone gets twitchy I am just reminding you of the need for valiation. The link won't work until the story's been validated. Hopefully this post will be redundant very soon Link to comment
Former Member Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 Validated? Uh? Help? I'm not really sure what's going on. Could someone explain I'm just the middle man Lol. Link to comment
Nephylim Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 Because of some problems with plagarism all chapters submitted to efiction go into a queue until the mods/admins can check them and then they are posted. Any links you put in here won't work until the story is validated and put into efiction. Your chapter is up there now Link to comment
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