[David McLeod] The Messenger Boy

[David McLeod]

This topic may be presumptuous...the story is short, there's no pretense of literary greatness, although the Muse thought it was "cute." There may be nothing to discuss. Anyway, "The Messenger Boy," which owed a great deal to Rudyard Kiplimg, has been posted here. It's complete in one chapter. Please enjoy, and Happy Holidays!

[ricky]

This topic may be presumptuous...the story is short, there's no pretense of literary greatness, although the Muse thought it was "cute." There may be nothing to discuss. Anyway, "The Messenger Boy," which owed a great deal to Rudyard Kiplimg, has been posted here. It's complete in one chapter. Please enjoy, and Happy Holidays!

 

Presumptuous? I think not. Since when did david McLeod ever post something that was not worthy of comment?

 

It was a great short. I loved it. But I think I would love a menu if you wrote it with your usual flare,

 

Cheers,

Nicely done.

[Fishwings]

Wonderful story! You've created an amazingly intricate world in a story of such a length, although I have to say, I wanted to read more about the ambush and the two loverboys : D.

 

I love the straight forwardness of the conversation.

 

 

Kim replied,

[ricky]

 

I love the straight forwardness of the conversation.

 

 

Kim replied, "I am either dead or dreaming, for you are the most beautiful boy in the world."

 

 

 

LOL. So cute.

 

 

Wasn't that though! I loved that part too.

[David McLeod]

Thanks to Ricky and Fish Wings for your comments...I'm sorry not to have posted for so long...blame the holidays and a "medical Sabattical."

Wouldn't it be great to live in a world where one could be that direct!