Slash Work

[Young Sage]

This is the thread to discuss my newest story, Slash Work. So far, two chapters have been released. Apparently I don't have to link them here, so I won't . Feel free to discuss plot, characters, future speculations, what have you.

[NightOwl88]

WOO HOO I'm the first person to post in the thread. AWESOME!!!!

 

I'm enjoying the story. I've never read a story about a writer who is writing a story, it's an interesting concept. Nick is...well Nick is a little full of himself but you have to be to some extent to be a writer anyway lol. At the moment I don't have much more to say at this point in time but expect me to be here more often.

 

Best,

Nightowl.

 

P.S

You should let folks know the thread is here.

[Young Sage]

There's not much to comment on at this point anyway. And I said in the closing notes that the thread would be up soon. Now is soon, right? I suppose I can give a little facts: Nick and Chad are both 20, both attending a typical 4-year university. The hoodie guy is based on someone I saw in my own morning Geography college class. This story HAS been posted elsewhere before with the same concept (real reviews shape the story). The differences with both versions' second chapter are already noticeable. The first chapter remained unaltered, so the diving point for both stories would remain the same.

[Young Sage]

...S***! I was supposed to have Ch. 3 up today! Argh...the last site I posted this to, people didn't like chapter three so much, so I decided to try to completely scrap the chapter and start anew. This never got done. Sorry. I'll work on it when I can. BSC will be up tomorrow as always.

 

Edit for below post: No. I will leave you all in the dark and then attach the completed chapter (when it's complete) to a long stick via a piece of string, and then provoke you mercilessly until I am no longer entertained.

Edited June 11, 2010 by Young Sage

[NightOwl88]

We are not them though dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We might like it lol. I'm jking, if you want to re-write it do it but keep us informed lol PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

Dude...that is just evil. I like it lol.

Edited June 11, 2010 by NightOwl88

[NightOwl88]

Good chapter Young Sage. I thought it was pretty funny myself, Dude is wonderfully oblivious lol. At least he is if my assumptions are correct. I don't think its odd that the sock thing has never been mentioned by your previous male readers. Most guys don't want to discuss their masterbation habits, or really consider the subject outside of their own world. I've actually found it funny how often socks get sued though in that way.

 

Anyhow, good chapter, best wishes,

NightOwl

[Young Sage]

I always thought that most male readers already know about what happens to a "saturated" sock, so they feel it isn't worth commenting on. But the females obviously DON'T know about what happens to an impregnated sock, so they get grossed out (and then continue to read what basically amounts to gay porn ). And I'm not sure who you're referring to as "Dude," since I have a lot of dudes in the story already (named and unnamed). Let's hope somebody else comes in here and this doesn't devolve into the 2 of us talking back and forth forever. Apparently, the mods don't like that (though, then again, technically the mods don't, or shouldn't, like a lot of the things I do on the forums, mainly gratuitous swearing, though it is my characters that are doing the swearing; rarely is it ME that does it).

[NightOwl88]

lol I'm talking about the main guy in your story, I don't remember his name, i think you've only mentioned it about twice lol. I agree, maybe you will get more fans in here, I am pretty surprised that Nephy and Ceadus haven't stopped in.

[Caedus]

Hey Guys!

 

So the sock things not a big deal, though the random guy texting (sexting) like he was inebriated was a good finish. Maybe make the texts more explicit to freak Nick out?

 

This Chapter was nice because there was more of Chad in this one and for some reason I like the character. I agree with Nephy that if you were to work in a rape scene that would be very entertaining, if you made some sort of humor out of it. Is that even possible???

[Young Sage]

Rape is not funny. I'll try my best !

[NightOwl88]

*Hugs Ceadus* good to see you here.

[Young Sage]

Yay, it's now a threesome! Wait...

[NightOwl88]

Yay, it's now a threesome! Wait...

 

You SERIOUSLY didn't just say that did you lol?

[Young Sage]

You SERIOUSLY didn't just say that did you lol?

I'm sorry! I'm chained to the powers of the Cosmic Comedy Entity. They demanded that a ripe opportunity for a lame joke to be had to be used, and I complied. I was a court jester in a past life, you know.

[NightOwl88]

... I was a court jester in a past life, you know.

 

 

Good gods that makes SO much sense. I was just joking myself. I've never considered a threesome.

[Caedus]

Haha you guys make my day.

 

So what's the name of the game with this thread?

[Young Sage]

Discuss the story, anything having to do with the story, praise me, verbally insult NightOwl, discuss sexual practices, etc.

[Caedus]

So where did Nick get the idea for his title? I don't really have any new praise for you today, though I will have tons of praise for you if you were able to insert cosplay or puppets into sex practices of a character....wait maybe not the cosplay, those guys creep me out almost as badly as the people who dress up as animals (shudders). CoughNightowlCough

[NightOwl88]

*Sits on his tree branch and glares with malice at Ceadus* I DO NOT dress up like an animal, I AM an animal brother. *GROOOOOOOOWL* Those guys are creepy though....I mean I KNEW foklks who got into that...I quickly lost touch with them. So Nick is his name, i need to remember that.

 

*Shooting Stars Collide* That is a curious title, I mean if they were Basketball players it could be clever, football though. I dunno, I'm with Ceadus on wondering.

[Young Sage]

There will be no bestiality (yes, that's how it's spelled) in Slash Work...or Black Star Cross...OR SSC. As for the title, I'd have hoped that you all would get it almost instantly. What other title out there sounds remotely like "Shooting Stars Collide"? And can't we all just accept the fact that NightOwl is weird?

[Caedus]

I knew that from the outset :maintains distance from animal lover: The only title That's remotely close that comes to mind..."Sparkling Combustion" by Sklights? :shrugs:

 

He doesn't has rabies does he? Do owls get rabies? : steps back, looks around for a weapon:

 

 

 

[Young Sage]

I'll wait and see if NightOwl has an epiphany tonight before I reveal the answer (to the title question; I'm pretty sure owls get SOME sort of disease).

[NightOwl88]

Yes actually Owls can get rabies, but I have had all my shots. Thank you Young Sage for defending my wierdness-honor (lands on YS's shoulder and pats his head with my wing), i am Honored lol. Ceadus, in the immortal words of Obi Wan 'If you strike me down I will become more powerful than you can imagine', yeah I paraphrased and NO I HATE Star wars, I just found the quote useful.

 

The only disease I have is Insulin Resistance, which is well controlled lol. I don't know for sure but when I read the title 'Shooting Stars Colide' I can't help but think of 'Black Star Cross'. They both have an S and a C word in them, and the word Star. I could be totally wrong but it would an interesting life parallel, which is what Slash Work is about after all.

 

 

[Young Sage]

Yes actually Owls can get rabies, but I have had all my shots. Thank you Young Sage for defending my wierdness-honor (lands on YS's shoulder and pats his head with my wing), i am Honored lol. Ceadus, in the immortal words of Obi Wan 'If you strike me down I will become more powerful than you can imagine', yeah I paraphrased and NO I HATE Star wars, I just found the quote useful.

 

The only disease I have is Insulin Resistance, which is well controlled lol. I don't know for sure but when I read the title 'Shooting Stars Colide' I can't help but think of 'Black Star Cross'. They both have an S and a C word in them, and the word Star. I could be totally wrong but it would an interesting life parallel, which is what Slash Work is about after all.

 

Ding-ding! NightOwl gets it right! Both have stars and if stars don't cross each other, they collide! Also, I'm pretty sure that owls have no bladder control, so shoo off my shoulder.

[Caedus]

You know I'm only joking, NightOwl. (Hides stake and holy water) Seriously though, your weirdness is part what makes talking you so much fun. Anyways your parallel makes sense. Both titles may be a refrence to the main charcters crossing paths and how unlikely such an occurrance is.

The closest thing I have to a disease is Sicke cell trait.

 

So what is it about guy A and B that makes their collision so amazing?