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Summary: Benjamin Connor’s rise to fame hardly surprised anyone, not even himself. He thrives in the spotlight and enjoys his work as an actor, but his world is turned topsy-turvy when he meets Mark, an unknown musician from Camden. As their relationship blossoms, Ben must decide whether to face the bigotry of Hollywood or keep his odd, interesting, gorgeous little punk a secret for the sake of his career. And for how long can such a high-profile individual keep a secret anyway?

 

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FINALLY.

 

Edit: to avoid reposting...first chapter was GREAT.  Can't wait for more!

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first chapter was awesome and we love you, and you should know that.

 

:wub:  :wub:  :wub:

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I love you guys! <3

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Thanks for the shout out <3

 

oh yeah, we like the shout out...

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*goes to read* feel bad for missing it...

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You should.  That second chapter was amazing!

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i read it, i know. and was amazing!!!

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Just finished chapter 3. Enjoying the pace and development of the story. Mark seems to be losing some of his punk edge. I do forsee some difficulties in the not to distant future!

Thanks. Looking forward to the ongoing saga

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Just finished chapter 3. Enjoying the pace and development of the story. Mark seems to be losing some of his punk edge. I do forsee some difficulties in the not to distant future!

Thanks. Looking forward to the ongoing saga

 

Cheers very much! I'm so glad you're liking it! :)

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part of me hates you now, even though i knew it was coming... :(  :no:

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Mark seemed to be getting a little clingy too...

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part of me hates you now, even though i knew it was coming... :(  :no:

 

I'm sorry, babe! Just know that I have 4 more chapters written and more in the works. I promise it doesn't end this way!

 

Mark seemed to be getting a little clingy too...

 

I dunno, when you're in the sort of honeymoon phase of a new relationship and you only get to see each other once a week, and one of those once a weeks goes away... I think I'd be a little desperate, too.

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still loving this btw. it's generally gorgeous :worship:  :hug:

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still loving this btw. it's generally gorgeous :worship:  :hug:

 

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love the story, cant wait for it to get better. I find it hilarious that love stories that are outside the 'norm' are usually done better than 'normal' love stories, as this story's quality exceeds the quality of most 'normal' love stories.

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Thank you, dear! :)

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