Jump to content

Waiting Outside The Lines 16 Is Up!

Comicality

By Comicality
in Cafe

 Share

Recommended Posts

Comicality Fabled Scribe

Comicality

Posted
Posted

I took a little stress break for a few days, had a little fun for St. Patrick's Day, and now I'm about to binge watch "Daredevil"! Hehehe! But I didn't forget to save up some goodies for you guys on your Spring Break! Enjoy! You've got a lot of goodies to come!

 

Chandler and Asa turn up the heat with a new Waiting Outside The Lines! Let me know what you think! :)

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/story/comicality/waitingoutsidethelines

  • Like 1
FieldMan Apprentice Scribe

FieldMan

Posted
Posted

Great story indeed, but I have to admit I was a bit disappointed by the last chapter.

Maybe I wasn't in the good mood for reading it but I felt - and I never thought I'd say this - there was too much sex in this chapter.

I'm sure Greyson somehow managed to spot MC in the trailer, and I'm dying to know if I'm right or not :P

Comicality Fabled Scribe

Comicality

Posted
  • Author
Posted

Thanks so much, you guys! :) I appreciate the comments! MWAH!!!

 

And no worries, FieldMan! With the chapter prior to this one, comments said there wasn't ENOUGH sex! Hehehe, so...damned if you do, damned if you don't. But I definitely try to even things out when I can. Super thanks for the feedback! :)

 

I did write an article on balancing 'sex and non sex' in Imagine Magazine if you guys wanna check it out! I think it was a part of the January issue, under "Comsie Talks"! Feel free to drop by and see my thoughts on the whole thing. Cool?

 

http://imagine-magazine.org/

FieldMan Apprentice Scribe

FieldMan

Posted
Posted

Thanks so much, you guys! :) I appreciate the comments! MWAH!!!

 

And no worries, FieldMan! With the chapter prior to this one, comments said there wasn't ENOUGH sex! Hehehe, so...damned if you do, damned if you don't. But I definitely try to even things out when I can. Super thanks for the feedback! :)

 

I did write an article on balancing 'sex and non sex' in Imagine Magazine if you guys wanna check it out! I think it was a part of the January issue, under "Comsie Talks"! Feel free to drop by and see my thoughts on the whole thing. Cool?

 

http://imagine-magazine.org/

Yep, I can imagine you can't please everyone :P I love the story anyway, it was just a minor critic

I've read your article in the workshop a few weeks ago, and loved it - especially the part about building up the sex scenes. Overall, I think the workshop is a goldmine :)

 Share
Go to topic listing
×
×
  • Create New...