GaryO Posted March 9, 2007 Posted March 9, 2007 Well it's that time of the week again folks, Enjoy! Excellent work as usual Vance! GaryO
I luv Dom Posted March 9, 2007 Posted March 9, 2007 Matt is definitely a man on a mission. If we only knew what it was...... Vance, Excellent start that is definitely leaving me wanting more! That is all.
Drewbie Posted March 9, 2007 Posted March 9, 2007 We already see a potential pain in the ass rich kid. And his family won't come Great chapter
ex52tech Posted March 10, 2007 Posted March 10, 2007 Great so far Vance, The making of the bed, the threats about loss of points after room inspection, and the way Mark handled Andy, reminded me of Basic Training............and I hated Basic. I'm interested to see how he ends up interacting with his roommates, especially since he is such a social butterfly. Can't wait for the next chapter. Ex.
writeincode Posted March 10, 2007 Posted March 10, 2007 LOVIN IT! I keep on expecting matt to hit on Mark. Like when mark said something like "you look good in clothes" i expected matt to be like "I look better out of them." Lol.
Centaur Posted March 10, 2007 Posted March 10, 2007 Another GREAT chapter Vance! All I can say to everyone is that the suspense will be getting BIGGER AND BETTER as the story progresses, so hold on to your hat! You'll be grounding your teeth trying to figure this one out - but you will HAVE to keep reading! Well done! Centaur
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