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[Vlista] One Moment: Chapter 6


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:hugs: :hugs: Matt

 

Meeting was going okay, stupid of him to think that mostly all runways are dead, other things he said. Really wonder now who is this guy Matt was saying sorry to, an old boyfriend or a john maybe. I felt good when Andy looked scared though.

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So Matt's parents "didn't want him", But they didn't throw him out either.

 

I love the way the important info is coming in short bursts here and there. It makes me pay attention and re-read things much more this way :D

 

Excellent job Vance!

 

 

That is all.

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Very good chapter but what's got my head spinning is what was on the computer that got Matt read that set him off like that. Whatever it was obviously affected Andy as well. You threw in a awesome cliffy too lol Like I luv Dom said the short bursts of important info here n there had me going back and re-reading too lol Excellent job V YOU ROCK !! :2thumbs:

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