[Vlista] One Moment: Chapter 11

[GaryO]

Hi Everyone!

 

It's that time of the week again and Vance has done it again!

 

Also another intresting turn of events!

 

GaryO

[Drewbie]

Damn. We did know that Matt's parents were unfit, now they also abusive, lack of any warmth.

 

Different way to meet Danny but what a great guy

 

Seems Andy is warming up more and more with Matt.

[Rabble_Rouser]

Another good chapter. It didn't move the story along much but it certainly gave us more background on Matt and vurther endeared him as a character. I can't decide whether Andy will be trouble or a big ally to Matt... guess I'll just have to wait until next Friday!

 

Steve

[dagus]

i think andy may be gay just don't want anyone to know, he got in trouble for something he did to some gay kid. but i think he may have done it cause he was with friends. i think he and matt may wind up together. but we will have to wait and see.

[I luv Dom]

I like Matt.

 

Excellent job of keeping us addicts happy, Vance!

 

 

That is all.

[cabbagepatchwife]

Yeah

 

Ross and I are loving this story and it

[marky55]

I'm busy next week, so could someone be a real treasure and send me the next few chapters NOW!.

Good try, but i think, that don't work!

 

Wow, Vance, great story. First I thought, it will be lazy.

But now - can't wait to read more. It enrolls more and more.

 

So some readers plot their ideas for the ongoing story. Here is mine:

 

I think, that Dr. Marshall and Mark are lovers. They weren't at home at the same time, aren't they?

And I believe, that Matts writing will help Andy for his coming out.

 

But - Vance has is own will - so I will be patient and wait for Friday - like Robinson Crusoe....

[captainrick]

 

K, Vance, this chapter did it! You got me! I love this kid now. Matt is a great kid just like Dr. Marshall now sees.

Now we all see it. I love this story. It is different. Matt is still a bit of an enigma, but the picture is getting clearer. Vance you've surpassed yourself yet again. Your talent for story-telling is out in the stratosphere. Thanks for another wonderful story!

 

Hugs,

 

Rick

[Altimexis]

Yup, this chapter did it for me, too. I have a feeling that either Dr. Marshall or Mark will end up fostering Matt. Not sure where that would leave Danny, though, if he eventually shows up, and I'm betting he will.