A friend of mine (also named Michael) has gone from HIV+ to AIDS quite a few times, so this story was closer to home than most. He's been healthy (as far as I know) for the past decade, thankfully. He's a bit of a character, and lives in LA, all about the aspiring actor life!
I liked the lows followed by the highs. Thanks again!
I'd love to see a longer story with Maurice and David, I think you could have fun with them. Just nothing related to Covid. I think we've all had enough of that!
I really need to go for walks in the park more (I'm almost their age, and waaay too single). Reading stories like this gives me hope!
Although, I don't have the history of a partner they both do. I'm the eternally single guy.
Nice story. A shorter read than some, but you covered all the bases. I'm glad you got back to Ronnie a bit, he seemed left out until this last chapter.
Would be a great story for a sequel if you have the urge (hint) 🙂
Decided to read some of your shorts today, as I tend to read longer stories for the most part. I enjoy your writing style, so had to give it a chance.
Great story, I think someone was cutting some onions nearby. Glad I have 2 more to read 😊
The depths you went to in damaging Brad, all of the horrible things Gary has done and is still doing, the past and present of the other residents of the house. I think you went way too far in trying to create desperate characters. I did go and read the epilogue, and was glad I decided to not read the rest of the story. Just not the subject matter I care to read, especially if it's fiction.
Ok I read this far, but events are getting just too unbelievable.
Writing style is good, but content is just a bit too far out there for any credible reading.
I think I'm done with this story.
"It was made clear when we discovered their galaxy that the planet was an invaluable resource."
I think you meant 'solar system'. Just nit picking a bit 😉
I enjoyed these 3 stories, althought I don't see the real connections between them? Ch1 and Ch3 were the best, though I think Ch1 had the best plotline to build on.
No idea what DAB was talking about it his rant above... I didn't see reference to anything he describes in the chapter? In any case, here we are almost 2 years later, and things are coming full circle. 😄
Good start to the story. I've read it before, but am here again. Personally I think events are a bit rushed, but that's IMO 😉
Bill has gone over the deep end. I'm guessing he's gonna have some troubles with this 'Sir' thing, that's just not good. Jed is nuts.
Where the heck did Fred come from out of the blue? That was strange.
Julie really needs to butt out of other peoples business. No one needs to have their life pushed at them like that.
Personally I'd have been 2 states away by now. Good luck, TR, you'll need it!
If I were TR at this point, I'd just pack up LBJ and get the heck out of there.
I think you went a bit overboard with Julie's information overload. No one wants to be controlled like that, even Bill!
Who is John (mentioned in last paragraph)?
All this because some greedy woman put holes in condoms. Until then, it was just teenage angst. 😒
Good story, but that's a lot of shit to live through.
A horrific and barbaric practice that has no place in the modern world unless medically necessary. Poor kid. They didnt even have any discussion regarding it.
Personally I have lack of sensation from being circumcised, so saying it is harmless is just false.
Oddly my father was not, so not sure of the thought process involved.