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Not really a conversation 11 y/o would have? Sounded more like they were 40 y/o.

Loved this story. You get so deep into complex details, but still provide an enjoyable read.

My guess is something to do with the Royal Erdbeasts.

ah the dreaded brown smell! 🤢

Antique is just around the corner Glad to find some new(ish) stuff of yours, I read much of your other work on CRVB.

Aiden creeps me out. He's turning all stalker obsessive.

Nice story, but I cracked up every time "textbook" terms were used during sex. So not sexy! 😆

Fair enough, I'm entrenched in the story that I have to read it out. I do hope you finish it

ugh... I really dislike the 'got a girl preggo' plot device. Give them a few happy years together then let them decide to be parents 😐

Yikes... the orgy was unexpected, but ok?

I hope they paid for the insurance on the car they gave to Jordan. Initial purchase isn't the only expense!

I liked the story, but think it was a bit rushed in terms of events, like having kids so quickly, they didnt have much of a chance to enjoy each other. Purely my opinion though

a species that is 4 billion years old? That's a bit difficult to believe, given how much life has evolved on this planet in less time.

No one in their right mind would put up with this. Sorry, but this story has lost my interest.

Wow... someone was cutting onions at that party! 😭 The scene where Billy's book was being read by Will really hit me right in the feels. 🥰 Thanks for such a great story.

Great series you have going here, love me some good sci-fi with plausible technology. You explain things very well! Just a few ideas: 1) borrow some robots from the space station for exploration of the doors, assuming they can go through doors, or get upgrades to the computing level of Difris or Nyf. Have them come along as security for the trio of humans as they travel. 2) more 'mini-minds' like Nyf and Brik. Each human should have his own 'buddy'. Even make them some bodies, maybe not as big as the other robots, but more scout sized. 3) send a wired connection through the doors as they explore, giving a live feed back to Difris. Anyway, enough of me hijacking your ideas. Looking forward to sequels. I think I'll dive into the Charlie Boone stories now

Loved the story, but the last chapter was kind of a shock. Get all attached to the characters and find out they don't 'exist'. 😢

Just a bit of a nitpick. Who in this day and age leaves their phone unlocked? 😁

OK. I'm out with that little twist. No warning, no tag on story with 'bestiality'. Pretty much killed this story for me. Also, a little factoid, but female dogs don't go into heat after being spayed, unless there is some ovarian tissue remaining, which there shouldn't be.

Good story, I like your writing style. Took awhile before I figured out this was in US rather than UK, there were a lot of UK references/words used. I'd go into detail, but I figure you know what those are by now Thanks for a good read.

lots of confusing UK vs US references in this story. I'm still unsure of where it's taking place.

Now we know its Bidad we need to watch out for.

another 19 y/o HS student... but I can believe Jon was held back a year!

Woody should have done the same with the other homework. Make it bad. poof no more homework for the asshole bro.